Love on Open Wounds - Comments

Akdjtinv. This was so cute. I got sad when I got to the end. It was so short. :(
But I liked it. And technically it was good. I didn't notice any mistakes. :)
Thanks for entering it in the contest. :D
xox

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A7X Slash Contest Comment

layout; I love Syn's face in the image, it's priceless and you matched colours pretty well. I also like the font used.

I love how you opened; telling us all about why the narrator loves his man, and all about his man's beauty. Their conversation is painful to read because I feel so bad for the narrator and I feel horrible because his lover is ignoring him. It's heartbreaking to read.

I loved the happy ending, it was so sweet. :3 They were perfect together. Their love was one of married couples <3

Thank you. This is very different from my other stuff, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Shit. That was beautiful :)). It seriously made me start bawling at the end. So much raw emotion in such a tiny little thing of a story. You did a wonderful wonderful beautiful beautiful gorgeous gorgeous job and the ending line was perfection. Simply perfection :)).