The Long Road Back - Comments

This was a surprise. It's not like the usual jonas fanfictions you see out there. I love it, I really do, and I don't even like the band/boys. I don't know what to say. There's minor technical errors, but it's nothing but a trip of the fingers. I've no cc to give you, therefore this comment is going to be short. This plot is so realistic, and easily relatable. And I love that you're switching around with the point of views, so we see both sides of the story, which is something we, as readers, don't get very often.

I assure you I'm going to subscribe.

It's an extremely well written story and I think you should definitely continue with it. I honestly don't like reading stories where the boys are 'bad' because I can't truly see them ever being that way. Usually, when I see stories like this it makes me angry at them (in the story) and that's how I can tell you're a good writer because you can make them into something that they're really not. I don't know if that makes sense, ha, but I hope so. Anyway, good job!

Wow I'm glad I read this!
It's a pretty good story and I'm happy you decided to continue it :)
Update very soon please!! :D

I was only able to read the first chapter just now. I dont have time to read the other two, but what I read was amazing! Coming back later to read the rest. KEEP GOING!

oh gosh i wasnt expecting this side of Nick Jonas i went from yelling at my computer to crying then back to yelling and so on but its not the kind of Nick Jonas fan-fic that you would expecet its like taking a leap of faith with it but thats why i love it so much and cant wait for the next chapter please update soon thanks!<3nat

OMG!
This fanfic is so amazing.
I'm so glad that you sent me the link.
It's so vunerable and real and that's why I love it.
You're an awesome writer and I can't wait to see what you post next.
Good job! <3 (:

I think you should continue it.
I haven't read a Jonas Story in forever! And I actually loved this one!
The characters are well defined and I would love to see how Nick changes from careless father to the ultimate dad. :)
Be sure to include Joe and Kevin too!
Haha! :)
I hope you do continue it. It will be amazing.

This was beautiful and so sad. You don't expect a Jonas to ignore their wife and child, to neglect telling their family they love them. Because they're so mellow and nice on television, at concerts, you just can't really picture it. But you did the transformation from happy, always nice rocker to careless father and husband perfectly. This was beautifully done.

Honestly, I didn't expect this to be about Nick Jonas. And I have to admit that I'm not a fan of him or the Jonas Brothers. But putting that aside, I really liked where you took this. Elizabeth is a wonderful mother; you don't see many stories like that where the mother is so protective like that. Well, that sounded stupid. Obviously a mother would be protective of her child. Anyways, this was a nice take on a fanfic (: Lovely job! <3

You wanna know something? I was not expecting it to be about Nick Jonas. Seriously. But it was a good surprise though. It's so different from the few Nick fanfics I've read.

Anywho, Nick seriously pissed me off. So kudos to you for getting me all worked up over a story. It shows that you got talent. xD Elizabeth is a great Mother. Protecting her kid and giving him hope when all things fail and crash. And at the same time, giving herself hope. I like how even after disappointment after disappointment, Nate still seems to keep the innocence and positive outlook in life that only a child seems have. Because only kids can do that. And I really want to excuse Nick's behavior because I hear tours can be stressing and all, but nope. Not gonna happen. xD It's great to know he learned his lesson...or did he? j/k I really like how the story transgressed as you kept reading.

There are a couple of things that I didn't like about the story. Like when you made them call each other by their full (And in Elizabeth's case, maiden) name. It makes the story seem awkward and I really didn't think it was that necessary. The flashbacks are another. Maybe you could've have incorporated them as a memory that each was remembering (through second pont of view) and rather than saying it in third person. Like how they are right now seem more suited for a full-fledged story rather than a one-shot. But the last thing I'm kinda iffy about is how Elizabeth still went home even after what happened with Nick in the last paragraphs. I would have thought that she would've gone with a friend in order to prevent from making her and Nate see how Nick was again. But maybe, that's just me.

Anyways, in overall, this IS really lovely story you have here. With a lot of potential to become a great full story. Seriously. Great Job.

OH MY FUCKING GOSH!!! THIS AMAMZING!!
I was yelling at my computer more than half of the time. its geneous and i really think that you should make it into a story.
throughout the story i was yelling "FUCKING DOUCHE BAG, DOUCHE BAG, NICE NICK NOW"(i was liking that), and them BAM!! "FUCKING DOUCH BAG ASSHOLE!!!"
i really liked that though and sorry for my major cursing, that just means i really like that. lol (: