I love your writing, girl! You use nice and painting descriptions. Your words are chosen with care and, you tell the story in a lovely, charming way. The concept of the story is really nice; Rapunzel in a modern take, told with humor and some seriousness. Also, I have to give you extra credits for the amazing story banner and layout. Good luck in the competition!
I like it.
I shall have to indeed read more of your stuff.