The Art of Fading - Comments

Why have you not updated? I've been waiting forever necausethis story is fucking amazing and yet you haven't updated in what seems like a year. So sad. I love the characters and the plot and the writing style you use and yet I seem like I've been waiting forever for the sotyr to actually start.vhell I HAVE been waiting forever, so p,ease update soon because you are an awesome writer.

i love your writing style. seriously.
i love your characters, too, and how they come to life in my brain so easily.
subbed.

you're a genius and I adore this.
and I swear to god I'll type an actual comment at some point.
promise.

HOLY FUCK I MISSED YOU. :D

I'm from a really small conservative town like this, so I really enjoy how realistic you're making this. I'm pretty sure I love this story.

Love <3

I love these kinda storys that sound so completely real and awesome (my brain is terrible with this stuff) and I'm having a hard time picturing Kenny, cause sometimes he doesn't sound too bad, then he goes and looks like a twat. Love the fight in Brans head, cause he's just a great character to tell the story from.

Kenny needs to stay out of the way. Bran & Ike for ever and ever and ever.

I loved this chapter, everything about it. I really liked the description of everyone in Denny's, I could really picture all of them and they're all so lovely and I like every individual personality and I didn't want to have to stop reading because this is so good. Not only did I exit like a coming out queen, but I passed out due to emotional stress. I see the time on the clock and figure I’ve been sleeping for five hours—respectively. I don’t bother to check my phone and question why my bed is so wet and where the hell my pillow is. I liked that bit, and I also really like Kenny and I can't wait for the next chapter and honestly don't even worry about updating frequently because who gives a shit when the chapters look like this.

Hahahah. This is epic and beautiful and a ton of other words I can't come up with at this particular moment.

Update soon, dearest. I really want to read more.(:

Kenny is strange.

(that's his name, right?
i think so...)

I just read this again,
and was reminded of last summer
when I got the stomach flu and ate an eggroll...
yeah, I can def. relate to Bran here.
And I swear to god there will be a legit comment on this soon.
threaten me with like, killing me with your hispanic temper or something. :p

amazing story...i'm a little confused though...what's going on where like with bran and ike it feels like something is going to happen but then you turn to bran and kenny and that also seems as though something is going on...but i still love it. Like i said before, amazing.

I love how long your chapters are and I love your story! It confuses me because I'm unsure if something is going to go on between Bran & Ike or Bran & Kenny. I love being confused while reading a story. <3

Wow! This is really good so far! Can't wait to see what happens next :D

I love this.(:
Bran and Ike in the truck was funny.

Hahaha, Ike and Bran in the truck.
That was hilarious. (:

And I really like the update a lot.
I hope you find the time to write more soon! (:

oh my GOD.
you have outdone yourself.
i love this, so much.
real comment to come tomorrow.

“Could be SARS,” I suggest. “Or pertussis.”

lmfao.

Wow, I like this a lot.
Ike and Bran's friendship sort of reminds me of one of mine.
Haha, and poor Kenny. I have a feeling he's bitten off more than he can chew.
Got to admit he's got balls though.

This is great, more soon?

I love this so much. I can't even form a decent comment because it's so fantastic.
Definitely subscribing, holy shit.

How does this not have more comments and readers? This is brilliant, really. I love it. The layout is simple, but the nice kind. And that first line of the first chapter, it ... my God, I am too jealous for words. It's ... it's lovely, a great way to introduce the relationship between each other. I like the relationship between them both (Isaac and... Bran that is). They seem so comfortable with each other. Bran admires him, and to me that makes it believable. I admire plenty of people for their different qualities, my best friends too.

Bran is blunt, and it seems that she likes who she is. I like that in a character and in a real person. Even though they might be the most bitchiest person in the world, they're comfortable with who they are and they're not going to change themselves. Okay, off topic, I think.

There are some grammatical errors, but nothing that'll make me barf of the horribleness. It's not that distracting, just like those one time accidents, I suppose. Anyway, I truly do love this. Subscribing!