Second Heartbeat - Comments

JUST WANTED TO LET EVERYONE WHO WAS EVER READING THIS, THAT I AM WORKING ON AN UPDATE NOW, AND AM SO SORRY THAT I LET THIS GET AWAY FROM ME LIKE THIS.

Also for the Caps. The next chapter should be coming up here in a bit, and then, well, I'm not sure where from there. Just know I'm glad for all the support, past, present, and future. <3

I just found this and please I'm begging you! You've got to update this!

dear god....this chapter mad me so fucking wet congratulations you are allowed to fuck me senseless

I'd like to know how you're listening to Fiction when it's not called that if Jimmy's still alive...he called it Death.

=D
awesomesauceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

When the fuck did you get a tattoo? hahaha, that's so Jimmy <3

To all readers of this story, I apologize for the lack of updates as well, I have kidnapped the writer for awhile. lol.

But there will be more soon!

I was smiling like a dork picturing Jimmy talking to that girl :)
and yay for Synie finally getting some Brian love <3

Hey, great story! Can't wait to hear more, especially about Trinity's past and Jimmy's near death. Also, I love your insight into the dom/sub scene. Most people think that all subs are weak willed or something. They don't seem to get that with a true dominant the submissive actually has more power.

Anywho, its great so far and I can't wait to hear more from you! : )

Just a heads up: the chapter posted twice =)

Are we going to get insight into what did happen to Jimmy? I mean, we know what happened IRL...but I'm curious on his take on it in this story. It obviously had a huge impact on the band and the story itself, so i'm wondering if he's going to keep it to himself or if it comes in later chapters.

Overall, though, I really like this story! It's an intersting idea, and I'm interested to see where future chapters go from here!

You KNOW I adore this story, I just felt like I should add a comment too. :-D

I love how pretty much a 30% out of it is bassed on Synie's tour stories
and I laughed at the memory of Jimmy saying Leana was good with her mouth, I couldn't stop laughing when Synie told me that.
update soon :)

love it!

:D your a really talented writer

I was mentioned in the author's notes :D Awesome!
I liked that it wasn't what I expected. And, I like that they're gonna get kinky ;)
This story... with this chapter, loving it even more.
Can't wait for an update!

A new fan :)
I loved chapter 9, especially the dance bit :D Quite... shocking for a girl like Trin, but of course... we don't know her history, maybe it's not so unusual, but it's kept in private quarters.
Loving the story and can't wait for the next one with all the action with Jimmy and Trinity. It's gonna be well awesome :D
Love it and can't wait for an update!

haha that was awesome the ending where jimmy an trin have the heated kiss was mind blowing haha i bet jimmy was shocked cant wait for the next update!!!!

Zachy should go as an Oreo cookie!

This is a very intersting story. I'm curious to see where you go with this =). I will try to re-read this chapter tomorrow and provide a much better comment, as I'm about half asleep at the moment.