June 28th, 2014 at 08:17am
Second Heartbeat - Comments
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I just found this and please I'm begging you! You've got to update this!April 23rd, 2014 at 04:19pm
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dear god....this chapter mad me so fucking wet congratulations you are allowed to fuck me senselessApril 9th, 2011 at 03:58am
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I'd like to know how you're listening to Fiction when it's not called that if Jimmy's still alive...he called it Death.March 6th, 2011 at 08:23am
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awesomesauceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeFebruary 16th, 2011 at 03:02am -
When the fuck did you get a tattoo? hahaha, that's so Jimmy <3January 6th, 2011 at 06:28am
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To all readers of this story, I apologize for the lack of updates as well, I have kidnapped the writer for awhile. lol.
But there will be more soon!January 5th, 2011 at 08:32am -
I was smiling like a dork picturing Jimmy talking to that girl :)
and yay for Synie finally getting some Brian love <3December 23rd, 2010 at 11:45am -
Hey, great story! Can't wait to hear more, especially about Trinity's past and Jimmy's near death. Also, I love your insight into the dom/sub scene. Most people think that all subs are weak willed or something. They don't seem to get that with a true dominant the submissive actually has more power.
Anywho, its great so far and I can't wait to hear more from you! : )December 22nd, 2010 at 03:52am -
Just a heads up: the chapter posted twice =)
Are we going to get insight into what did happen to Jimmy? I mean, we know what happened IRL...but I'm curious on his take on it in this story. It obviously had a huge impact on the band and the story itself, so i'm wondering if he's going to keep it to himself or if it comes in later chapters.
Overall, though, I really like this story! It's an intersting idea, and I'm interested to see where future chapters go from here!December 21st, 2010 at 04:52am -
You KNOW I adore this story, I just felt like I should add a comment too. :-DDecember 20th, 2010 at 09:37pm
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I love how pretty much a 30% out of it is bassed on Synie's tour stories
and I laughed at the memory of Jimmy saying Leana was good with her mouth, I couldn't stop laughing when Synie told me that.
update soon :)December 18th, 2010 at 08:49am -
love it!December 15th, 2010 at 01:01am
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:D your a really talented writerDecember 13th, 2010 at 06:01am
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I was mentioned in the author's notes :D Awesome!
I liked that it wasn't what I expected. And, I like that they're gonna get kinky ;)
This story... with this chapter, loving it even more.
Can't wait for an update!December 13th, 2010 at 01:33am -
A new fan :)
I loved chapter 9, especially the dance bit :D Quite... shocking for a girl like Trin, but of course... we don't know her history, maybe it's not so unusual, but it's kept in private quarters.
Loving the story and can't wait for the next one with all the action with Jimmy and Trinity. It's gonna be well awesome :D
Love it and can't wait for an update!December 11th, 2010 at 07:23pm -
haha that was awesome the ending where jimmy an trin have the heated kiss was mind blowing haha i bet jimmy was shocked cant wait for the next update!!!!December 11th, 2010 at 03:29pm
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Zachy should go as an Oreo cookie!
This is a very intersting story. I'm curious to see where you go with this =). I will try to re-read this chapter tomorrow and provide a much better comment, as I'm about half asleep at the moment.December 10th, 2010 at 06:48am
Also for the Caps. The next chapter should be coming up here in a bit, and then, well, I'm not sure where from there. Just know I'm glad for all the support, past, present, and future. <3