Crashing Down - Comments

Oh my god, this is perfection on a platter of beauty.
Shit, I almost started crying during the first two chapter, lol. Caroline's life...ugh.
I just, wow. I love the way you portrayed everyone and Tyler is so adorable and this is wonderful.

I love this. You're a terrific writer.

Gahhhh, why have I not read this before? This is amazing, to say at the least. And you've captured the characters of Caroline and Damon very well I think. It's like I could really see this all happening. Definitely subscribing <3

Twilight reference, fuck yeah. This story is amazing. I don't even know what else to say without sounding like a fruit, but well...you already know how much I love this story. :)

I didn't think I would like this.
Well, crap, I was wrong.
I'm now officially addicted to this, and shall be subscribing.
The way your words flow is beautiful -- that's my problem with most stories, is that they don't flow well. Yours does, and I love it, and I want to write like you, and I'm running off on a tangent now.

I just realized that I've never commented on this story. -.- You capture Caroline wonderfully.In your dialogue, I can hear Caroline's voice in my head saying those things like when she snapped at Bonnie in the first chapter. Then in the last chapter when she got all close to Tyler and rested her head on his shoulder, I could see that happening. And I must say, even though I'm against that pairing in the show, you make me want to see it happen.

The Twilight reference made me giggle. So basically, I love this. <3

FINALLY! Okay, I've read both chapters and I freaking love you. I love the twist you're taking. The lack of Caroline--the whole Caroline hating life even more so than she does in the show. I'm wondering what similarities you're keeping and what you'r exchanging, but even so, it's fantastic. And I'm hooked and I'm staying subscribed. Oh yeh

this is amazing :) and so well written.
you've made me feel sincere sympathy for caroline.
definitely subscribing. you are a wonderful writer.
please keep it up. ++ damon ... ;) = sex.

I don't watch the show, but I like this story so far!

I love this, I love this I love this. I don't even know half the characters or whatever, ah.. yeah, I don't, but I don't care. Your choice of words are perfect, and it felt really easy to read. :3

I think I'm in love. <3

I adore the first paragraph. You make her seem so perfect and innocent and bright. And then by the end you're like - "Well...crap."

Is it bad of me to love you so much right now for making Bonnie the b*tch se is? xD

I love how you first set this at school. Because let's face it. Appearances at school mean everything to most of the people there and to be the once beautiful girl and tear it all down later - not so much of the good.

But the part that hooked me for good and will be probably my favorite throughout the story is -

"Caroline doesn’t go directly home, instead she drives to the woods and loses herself amongst the trees. With a bleeding bunny by her side, she lies on the dirt and leaves and closes her eyes. Just for a minute, a moment of peace and pretending."

She has a bleeding bunny at her side, a testament that she's not the same girl she used to be anymore and yet, she still pretends. <3

I absolutely love this. Your words are so perfect and it's like you're actually watching the show. Can't wait for more. <3

I absolutely love the last lines, 'a few moments of peace and pretending'. Everyone has those moment, and in doing so, you make Caroline relatable as more than just a character in a story.

keep up the great writing :)

YES. YES. YES. I am so excited for this story, you have no idea. <3

The opening paragraph is beautiful, it really is. I also love how the words just flow, you know? Some of the stories I've read just don' t have that UMPH that I look for, and this certainly has that, and more, to be completely honest.

“You killed me,” she growls. “And then you tried to kill me again. I don’t need you for shit.” Yes, Caroline. Damon's a meanie, you tell that jerk off. >(

I think I can relate better to Caroline than Elena or Bonnie, as unusual as that seems considering I don't sleep around like she has (or was would be the most appropriate word). But there's just something in her that's so broken, and I feel sorry for her, I really do.

I love that you decided to make this into a story. Caroline is my bb, and before Tyler, Damon was the one that I would pair her up with. Their relationship just fascinated me. I liked them better than Elena and Stefan or Elena and Damon (and to be honest, that couple still pisses me off. Elena isn't on my favorite list either).

I can't wait to read more, and I'm totally subscribing. <3