I really like how there was a little more dialogue than description -- it was something I really liked about this drabble. The only thing I had a problem with this was the content color. I really couldn't read the green content color with the red background. Overall, this was really well written -- I really liked it.
The only thing I had a problem with this was the content color.
I really couldn't read the green content color with the red background.
Overall, this was really well written -- I really liked it.