I really like the start, and the next chapter. Due to personal prefernce, this isn't my usual choice of reading, and I think the constant exclamation marks are annoying, but that's me and my grammer...:L All in all, It's good, pretty interesting once you get into it
Hehe I love the layout madikinz. like I said I will try to write Romano for you. Hows bout you tell me what youw ant and I write in adn show you at school? Then you know if I can do it?
ANYWAYYY. Dude this rocks. Love the idea and I really hope I can help and be part of it>.< You Pierson guy, your writing is awesome^.^ Love it<3