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  • TinyDancer425

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    good story..very interesting so far..update soon please!
    December 13th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • midnighter13

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    Poor Brynn . . . I feel so sad now . . . . I hope it does get easier . . . . Poor, Poor Brynn . . . .
    I need to go read something to cheer me up . . . . .
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    (Just a warning, I'm a little bit of a silent reader, so I may not comment after every chapter, but I'll always be reading =D)
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • gummibears

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    Ahhhh-mazing! Update?
    December 13th, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Ohh, damn I feel so damn sorry for Brynn
    At first she had to grow up in an abusive environment
    And now she had to go through the stuff Matt puts her through
    I mean, she could be glad that he was at least somewhat considerate and didn't force himself inside of her without preparing her somewhat
    This rape will affect her on a whole new level
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 12:39pm
  • UltraViolett

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    I love this story idea :) update soon please
    December 12th, 2010 at 06:16am
  • Oakleyyy

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    Dude! My cousin has the same name spelled the same! Haha love this tho
    December 9th, 2010 at 08:45pm
  • Burning_Desire

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    Continue :) I love this :)
    December 8th, 2010 at 10:27pm
  • midnighter13

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    I read 'Goodbye to Romance' and I love it, and I like your story too!! Please continue!!
    December 8th, 2010 at 06:20pm
  • The_Used

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    I seriously love this! Hope you update soon!!
    December 8th, 2010 at 05:56pm
  • HAIFISCH

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    Goodbye is really good so is your story so far please keep it up
    December 8th, 2010 at 08:01am
  • HAIFISCH

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    Goodbye is really good so is your story so far please keep it up
    December 8th, 2010 at 08:01am
  • childofnarcosis

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    I really like this. Some more details would be great, but for a first chapter I get a damn good feel. And now I'm going to read Goodbye To Romance.lol I'll be waiting for the next update.
    December 8th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • justhannah;

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    This is very, very good so far. I can't wait till your next update!
    December 8th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • Lenne2008

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    It does sound good but there are details that are missing..I'm not really getting a description of the area surrounding her or any of the characters she runs into..just vague descriptions. I think you have great potential just need those details.
    December 8th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • PunkxPrincess101

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    I really like the title. It's different and new! And I agree this story sounds really good!
    December 7th, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    I totally love the idea you have for this story
    And even though I can see where your inspiration from 'Goodbye to Romance' comes from (as I read that story myself)
    I can definitley tell that yours is going to be unique
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    December 7th, 2010 at 09:55pm