Poor Brynn . . . I feel so sad now . . . . I hope it does get easier . . . . Poor, Poor Brynn . . . . I need to go read something to cheer me up . . . . . . (Just a warning, I'm a little bit of a silent reader, so I may not comment after every chapter, but I'll always be reading =D)
Ohh, damn I feel so damn sorry for Brynn At first she had to grow up in an abusive environment And now she had to go through the stuff Matt puts her through I mean, she could be glad that he was at least somewhat considerate and didn't force himself inside of her without preparing her somewhat This rape will affect her on a whole new level I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
I really like this. Some more details would be great, but for a first chapter I get a damn good feel. And now I'm going to read Goodbye To Romance.lol I'll be waiting for the next update.
It does sound good but there are details that are missing..I'm not really getting a description of the area surrounding her or any of the characters she runs into..just vague descriptions. I think you have great potential just need those details.
I totally love the idea you have for this story And even though I can see where your inspiration from 'Goodbye to Romance' comes from (as I read that story myself) I can definitley tell that yours is going to be unique I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)