Edge of Seventeen - Comments

is this still active?

please update soon!

OHMYGOD I was brought here by Comment Swap and now I'm actually addicted which translates to 'UPDATE NOW OR I WILL CRY!' I love the plot for this and it's all in all a fantastic, and I am so glad that I found this. I adore the chemistry between Zacky and your character, I don't think I found any Grammar mistakes, a few spellings but oh well. I love how you managed to pretty much capture everyone's personalities as well, keep writing I think you could be an amazing writer some day!

Love this story its so funny.can't wait till the party please update

Again i say: UPDATE HO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE HO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GAWDS! I love I Won't See You Tonight Part 1 xD
I enjoy the giggles you give me with your stories, tis awesome! xD

<3

ps, I likes this story.
pps Mattie is adorable! xD hehehehe

So yeah, I'm late to the party, but this story is amazing!!!!!!!! =)

iiiiiiiiiiii have laughed so hard at this it's truly amazing!!!!
i love elli and yeah its amazing.
Xander was hysterical at hte end of that last chapter
i hope you update this soon!
how bout a deal. you update this and i will update one of my stories, you can pick ^_^

*Eye twitch* Xander is spelt with a Z near the end... sorry that just buggs me. ANY HOO HOW! LOVE IT SO FAR!!!! But oh my god, Ella, waffles? really?

I bet you're not going to guess this but I loved this chapter I think her convo with Jimmy about the kitten was cute and funny and it just made me laugh, sorry I'm just now getting to read it but I have been out of town.

that fit my like a dress… a stripper’s dress that barely covered my big Latino ass, but a dress none the less.

Shouldn't that first my be a me?

Other then that little thing there I didn't find anything wrong at all and absolutle cant wait on the party, and my spork says to tell you he wont stab you and he thinks he's batman!

Much <3 Kat

I loved it just as much as I love you!!!

Loved it

I'm glad Zacky and her are getting alone time :P
:O i want a child with Jimmy XD
I'm excited for the party, update soon.

I have decided you must message me and share with me the idea's you have so I can cast my vote and I gave you serveral names on your profile page so wheres my update huh?

Do I have to sick my Spork who thinks he's Batman on you?

This one made me laugh so hard!! Loving it=]

made me laugh my ass of

*raises hand* I want her 2 go on tour! ^.^ Aw i loved getting to see what matt & zacky thought... kinda lol it was cute! I love that he loves her already, Matt i mean.

So I'm pretty happy with this update it made me smile I like how its just kind of laid back and normal all the guys still getting used to her, and I love how Matt is so attached to her..

Its a good chapter I didn't see any mistaks or anything like that, and thought it took a while for you to get it out it looks like you used that time well and write a good chapter..

Also I agree with Violet Twist if she doesn't go on tour with them I'm going to have to get you with a Spork as well, and my spork, well it has issues it thinks its Batman!

Pfft. Devious ho. You and I both know Ellie is going on tour with them. Cause if she didn't, I'd stab you with your own spork. But it was a cute chapter. Especially JimJim's declaration of Ellie being his kitty :) more ho!