Cemetery Gates - Comments

loved

YAY! Lip action! =D

I like this so far.
The chapters are a little choppy and short, but it's great. (:
Can't wait to read more. I love Mackys
<3

I like this.I don't normally read guy on guy but Zacky is my favorite and Matt is second lol so I found this strangely intriguing.Can't wait for an update!!

I like it. =D

I've had panic attacks like that before. They suck SO bad.

Wow... I got confused at first with the P.O.V thing but now it all makes sense :3 The only thing I would change is add a little more length to the chapters but otherwise I think it's awesome :)

i like this story but one thing is you don't have to emphasize a bunch of words in every sentence...it's good without it like a few yes that's great but one every sentence just gets boring and annoying...just giving you some constructive criticism

Love this, keep it up!

i'm not usually the to leave a comment so i feel honored to give you your first one :) i love this story so keep going please :)