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  • bloodravyn

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    loved
    February 7th, 2012 at 01:25am
  • IComeAliveAtNight

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    YAY! Lip action! =D
    November 28th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • Sapphire Sky

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    I like this so far.
    The chapters are a little choppy and short, but it's great. (:
    Can't wait to read more. I love Mackys
    <3
    November 28th, 2011 at 03:23am
  • CountSynula

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    I like this.I don't normally read guy on guy but Zacky is my favorite and Matt is second lol so I found this strangely intriguing.Can't wait for an update!!
    November 28th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • IComeAliveAtNight

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    I like it. =D
    November 23rd, 2011 at 12:21am
  • MissMadHatter6661

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    I've had panic attacks like that before. They suck SO bad.
    May 5th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • Little Miss Zacky V.

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    Wow... I got confused at first with the P.O.V thing but now it all makes sense :3 The only thing I would change is add a little more length to the chapters but otherwise I think it's awesome :)
    January 8th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    i like this story but one thing is you don't have to emphasize a bunch of words in every sentence...it's good without it like a few yes that's great but one every sentence just gets boring and annoying...just giving you some constructive criticism
    January 7th, 2011 at 03:41am
  • no-name-

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    Love this, keep it up!
    January 6th, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • FictionisTrue12

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    i'm not usually the to leave a comment so i feel honored to give you your first one :) i love this story so keep going please :)
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:10am
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