Breakeven - Comments

i feel like their break-up is imminent, which is good :)
i've started shipping martin/zack so hard because of you and they just need to get back together!

MARTIN SHOULD ASK ZACK TO GO WITH HIM! That'd just be awesome. Okay, I love this :) more soon

love it <3

Awwhhh D:

thank you!
i've been waiting for this to be updated. :3
i saw on tumblr that you were having problems writing this update 'cause you messed up the outline or something...
but um, yeah. thank you so much. :3

zack didn't let him explain? D: why! why, zack, why? ):
i guess it would make sense, though. zack might not have wanted to listen anymore because he might've been too hurt, and afraid of getting hurt again or something like that. especially with alex around, who probably helped convince zack that martin was cheating on him and stuff.

i really hope the misunderstandings are cleared up, though. >.< they need to get back together.
martin needs to stop lying to himself (although technically he's not lying to himself; he knows he loves zack and all) and john. and zack, in a way.
regardless of whether he cheated on john with zack or not, what he's doing right now is selfish too, because he's dating john and stuff even though his heart is with zack! so even if he hadn't cheated on john physically, he's still cheating on him emotionally! >3
): i bet zack gave martin back the ring when they broke up, huh? ):

well. um. i can't even. i love this story so much.
more soon, pretty please? D: :3

oh that ring was so cute!
I kinda feel sorry for Martin for having his head so messed up, but I'm still sympathising with Zack at the moment.
Can't wait for the next update!

that was awesome:) the stuff between Martin and Zack was soo cute!! i want them to get back together!!

Thanks for updating :D
I really love this <3

aw, i really liked the flashback :)
i feel an explanation of what really happened coming on...
love it, as usual!

That's so cute! ^^ too bad it happened a while ago :/

OHMYGOD. it was all a misunderstanding?! >(
i need to find out why zack thought martin was cheating!
they need to clear all these misunderstandings up and get back together!
not just the misunderstanding that made them break up, but also this one. 'cause i think it's not fair if zack keeps thinking that martin would do such a thing to him, even if zack forgives him or whatever. D:
well um, anyway, yeah. lovely update, really. :3

and. caleb and alex are adorable!
“Why don’t you wake him up?”
“Because. He’s sleeping.”
i just completely fell in love with that scene. :3

so um, anyway, yeah. i really can't wait for the next update! like seriously. D: D: D:
pleasepleaseplease update this soon. i've been waiting for an update for one of your stories, like seriously i've been stalking my subscriptions page. :/
but uh. yeah. thank you so much for the update. x]]]]
the twist in the chapter - like martin suddenly leaving zack instead of sleeping with him or whatever - was really unexpected. x]

Great update, as usual.
Poor Zacky though D:
I'm kinda hoping to see a little bit of Caleb and Alex's relationship later on, but I'll just let you surprise me :D

POOR ZACK. D: But...poor Martin as well, I think this is how he felt when Zack accused him of cheating....
Gah, this story is fantastic, I hope you update soon!

No! I feel bad for Martin right now. He's just trying to prove a point, and I think he did the right thing by not letting it get that far.
Can't wait for the next update!!

Aw! I feel so bad for Zack

Oh Martin :( Martin, Martin, Martin :(
The tattoos are really cute...but Martin was so horrible :(
It is sweet that Zack's still protecting Martin though!

that broke my heart.
i just want martin and zack to be happy together.
can martin go break up with john now?

Poor Zack :'(
Thanks for updating <3

:o
Oh dear god. This was just asdfghjkl :'D
I loved this update.
Fucking finally, Martain grew some :)

YAY :D im so happy they kissed :') cant wait for the update hope everything turns out okay!!