February 3rd, 2011 at 05:52am
Honestly, whilst reading the first few paragraphs I believed that Rian had been the one abusing Zack, just like Alex had assumed and it broke my heart because Rian is cute and soft and wouldn’t hurt a fly. Part of me is glad that it’s not Rian abusing Zack but then a small part of me really does wish it was him being abusive because it would probably be easier to deal with, would it?
You can feel the love radiating off Zack for his sister, you really can. He honestly wants to keep her innocent and sweet and pure which melts my heart, it really does. But then my heart is broken by his dad – it’s so depressive and wrong. And then there’s the innocence’s of his sister again which makes me want to cry. She just wants her brother to be happy and for her mother to come back. It’s so sad.
I love how much the band guys care about him and how much it breaks Rian’s heart – he evens cares so much about Sam too which makes me smile. And that ending makes my heart feel so warm and the ending is so cute and fucking incredible.
Sav, I’m speechless – this story is so amazing and perfect.
Well done.
I literally don't know what else to say other than that I absolutely adored it
You took the theme and did an awesome job with it <333