April 17th, 2011 at 04:08am
Marble House - Comments
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lol to horny new vampy franky xD i bet he dont mind the change now ;DApril 16th, 2011 at 09:41am
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Amazing update aww horny vampire Frankie lol I love it!
Clara xxxApril 16th, 2011 at 03:49am -
you will be fine if you tell people how to have hot fucking sex like that :D haha gona call my boyfriend looool :P just kidding but wow thatw as hot! :D more please XDApril 16th, 2011 at 02:44am
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OMG some very hot, yet very short vampire sex...its heaven!
As always it was great writing, I enjoyed reading this.
More soon please
Love
TCSApril 16th, 2011 at 01:52am -
This story is incredible. I love the strange twisting plot of abuse, stripping, addiction and (the cherry on top) vampires. You really have a talent and I can't wait to read more.April 15th, 2011 at 11:06pm
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This was good, I can't even begin to explain how happy I am that Rick is dead! He was such a bastard. I like how you did all the 'becoming a vampire' stuff too. I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope we see more of the end of the last chapter too ;]April 15th, 2011 at 10:19pm
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I lover this!!April 15th, 2011 at 08:40pm
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Oh Jesus.
I love this and I certainly love you!!
It was just beautiful :D:D:D
And I love how you have your own take on vampires. It's unconventional and I just can't get enough honey :3
More soon yes?
:D:D:D
xxxxxApril 15th, 2011 at 06:07pm -
I know this isn't the most helpful or insightful of feedback, but fuck.. that was hot :P
This story is just so fucking intriguing. So original and I love every thing about it.
Frank's reactions to everything is brilliant. I wonder if that will change; how will he feel after he's finished fucking Gerard :P
I'm so excited to see how this pans out, where this goes. How their lives evolve and change together.
Great update! Can't wait for more :DApril 15th, 2011 at 04:55pm -
this was a hell of an update! SO AWESOME! :3
please, keep up with this, I love the way you write and this story as serious potential! :3
---XO---April 15th, 2011 at 04:25pm -
So..um...WOW. Vampire Frank sounds freaking hot. I am so glad he made it through the change and all. I wonder if he's mad at Gerard at all for changing him. I mean I know they just got it on and all but I wonder how Frank is gonna feel after that high wears off. Can't wait for more. <3April 15th, 2011 at 03:54pm
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Okay, fuck, I think Frank is going to turn him into a vampire, or maybe I'm just an idiot.
And ... I know this makes me a sick freak, but I'm really glad Gerard mauled Rick.
Slick Rick was not my cup of tea, just letting you know.
Anyways, it was a well-written update, and you certainly have got my attention now, I'm excited.
:>April 14th, 2011 at 05:12pm -
omgomgomgom yayayayayayay
now frank is gonna be a vamp
and they can make perfect vampire babies
YAYYYYYApril 13th, 2011 at 02:08pm -
woooooooow :3 how awesome!
I hope Frankie doesn't get mad at Gee, though :/
wow, amazing story :3
---XO---April 12th, 2011 at 04:34pm -
I'm worried Frankie will be pissed... but he should be grateful.. least he's not dead..
IM EXCITED!!!!
xoApril 12th, 2011 at 02:54pm -
Holy shit O.o
That was intense.April 12th, 2011 at 09:46am -
D: My comment was so crappy, i just had to write another :/ Well, that rick bastard is dead! XD And frank will now be with gee forever and everand hopefully is a fertile vampire so him and gee can have babies I'm so happy :D Can not wait for next chapter, seriouslly O_OApril 12th, 2011 at 06:39am
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Eeeep! frank will be ba vamp :DApril 12th, 2011 at 06:38am
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Awesome i loved it i hope that Gee is now turning Frankie into a vamp and im happy cuz he killed RickApril 12th, 2011 at 01:44am
BUT IT WAS GOOD, SO. Don't worry about it.
I love that you're winging how a vampire is turned and making it nice for me to read, bahahah.
Honestly, you're just freaking baller, I think you should just get used to it.