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  • skeletonletters.

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    Ahaha, your author's note made me laugh, because I feel the exact same way whenever I update.
    BUT IT WAS GOOD, SO. Don't worry about it.
    I love that you're winging how a vampire is turned and making it nice for me to read, bahahah.
    Honestly, you're just freaking baller, I think you should just get used to it.
    April 17th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • Frankie's Gee.

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    lol to horny new vampy franky xD i bet he dont mind the change now ;D
    April 16th, 2011 at 09:41am
  • JckWhite

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    Amazing update aww horny vampire Frankie lol I love it!
    Clara xxx
    April 16th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Sibbiesibsib

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    you will be fine if you tell people how to have hot fucking sex like that :D haha gona call my boyfriend looool :P just kidding but wow thatw as hot! :D more please XD
    April 16th, 2011 at 02:44am
  • TechniColorScream

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    OMG some very hot, yet very short vampire sex...its heaven!
    As always it was great writing, I enjoyed reading this.
    More soon please

    Love
    TCS
    April 16th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • Faitily;Yours

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    This story is incredible. I love the strange twisting plot of abuse, stripping, addiction and (the cherry on top) vampires. You really have a talent and I can't wait to read more.
    April 15th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • mcrloveforever4

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    This was good, I can't even begin to explain how happy I am that Rick is dead! He was such a bastard. I like how you did all the 'becoming a vampire' stuff too. I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope we see more of the end of the last chapter too ;]
    April 15th, 2011 at 10:19pm
  • goodthings

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    I lover this!!
    April 15th, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • DryIce.

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    Oh Jesus.
    I love this and I certainly love you!!
    It was just beautiful :D:D:D
    And I love how you have your own take on vampires. It's unconventional and I just can't get enough honey :3
    More soon yes?
    :D:D:D
    xxxxx
    April 15th, 2011 at 06:07pm
  • KilljoyScarecrow

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    I know this isn't the most helpful or insightful of feedback, but fuck.. that was hot :P
    This story is just so fucking intriguing. So original and I love every thing about it.
    Frank's reactions to everything is brilliant. I wonder if that will change; how will he feel after he's finished fucking Gerard :P
    I'm so excited to see how this pans out, where this goes. How their lives evolve and change together.
    Great update! Can't wait for more :D
    April 15th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • all time perv.

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    this was a hell of an update! SO AWESOME! :3
    please, keep up with this, I love the way you write and this story as serious potential! :3
    ---XO---
    April 15th, 2011 at 04:25pm
  • stay weird

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    So..um...WOW. Vampire Frank sounds freaking hot. I am so glad he made it through the change and all. I wonder if he's mad at Gerard at all for changing him. I mean I know they just got it on and all but I wonder how Frank is gonna feel after that high wears off. Can't wait for more. <3
    April 15th, 2011 at 03:54pm
  • skeletonletters.

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    Okay, fuck, I think Frank is going to turn him into a vampire, or maybe I'm just an idiot.
    And ... I know this makes me a sick freak, but I'm really glad Gerard mauled Rick.
    Slick Rick was not my cup of tea, just letting you know.
    Anyways, it was a well-written update, and you certainly have got my attention now, I'm excited.
    :>
    April 14th, 2011 at 05:12pm
  • Ace Lightning.

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    omgomgomgom yayayayayayay
    now frank is gonna be a vamp
    and they can make perfect vampire babies
    YAYYYYY
    April 13th, 2011 at 02:08pm
  • all time perv.

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    woooooooow :3 how awesome!
    I hope Frankie doesn't get mad at Gee, though :/
    wow, amazing story :3
    ---XO---
    April 12th, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • bloodandcigarettes

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    I'm worried Frankie will be pissed... but he should be grateful.. least he's not dead..
    IM EXCITED!!!!
    xo
    April 12th, 2011 at 02:54pm
  • isles and glaciers

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    Holy shit O.o
    That was intense.
    April 12th, 2011 at 09:46am
  • Frankie's Gee.

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    D: My comment was so crappy, i just had to write another :/ Well, that rick bastard is dead! XD And frank will now be with gee forever and everand hopefully is a fertile vampire so him and gee can have babies tehe I'm so happy :D Can not wait for next chapter, seriouslly O_O
    April 12th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • Frankie's Gee.

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    Eeeep! frank will be ba vamp :D
    April 12th, 2011 at 06:38am
  • angy_something

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    Awesome i loved it i hope that Gee is now turning Frankie into a vamp and im happy cuz he killed Rick
    April 12th, 2011 at 01:44am