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  • MakingMeFamous

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    I loved how this moved smoothly even though it was two people writing
    December 11th, 2010 at 12:01am
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    Yeah, so it`s good. I can`t read any more I`m like ADHD and it`s really long
    December 10th, 2010 at 11:53pm
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    this is really good(: I love the quote btw too and tokio hotel is amazing
    I`m upset for them smoking them :( :( :( ha ha
    this story is really good, I can imagine being there(:

    I also love this line it`s so cute and loving and such(:
    "Listen. You can't be broken, because I'm you and you're me and as long as I'm okay you'll be okay. And if you ever get broken," he squeezed his brother's hand and angled his head to look into Bill's frightened doe eyes, "I'll always be there to fix you."

    I`m not done reading will in a little
    December 10th, 2010 at 11:43pm