Dealing With Maturity - Comments

I loved it - fantastic job!! <3

Man, I love this! I love you for making this! I love this! (Dammit! I already said that!)

If there was a typo, I overlooked it.

I love what you have written. It brought back some raw memories (mostly the tears [yes the memory is still fresh in my brain]) which made the reading much more rich. And I dunno if it's the late hour, the sugar, or something else but I just laughed a whole lot while reading basically all of it. The whole hotel room scene reminds me of my friends and our shenanigans; mostly the shenanigans we get up to in my room.

And Corms swearing made me laugh big time! I was just thinking, "I have to beat this combination!" Yes, your 8-word combo beat my 5-word.

Very well done! ^_^