You're Such a Gorgeous Nightmare - Comments

Really good story, it should do good in the contest :D

P.S. I love your layout for the story XD

Great job.
I love the way you concluded things. The whole thing was amazing!
Thanks for getting your entry in on time!
P.S. I think you should continue it.

*GASP* HE KISSED HER.

okay so I can't wait for the third chapter of your entry!!!!!!!!! Truly love your writing, doll <3

MM =]]

ohhh i love it! greatness :D

great frikin job, dude!!!! =DDDD absolutely loved it. like katie said, i enjoyed the spazzing!!! baha.

what an evil girlfriend. o.O

as far as constructive criticism goes, you did have a few grammar/spelling errors, like the 'controlling' thing, but for someone who lives out in Croatia, you are doing AMAZING! trust me, i know what it's like using a language you weren't born with haha...im workin on being trilingual o.o

so excellent job!!! next chapter, please? =D

cant wait for the rest of the entry <3 thank you for entering the contest!

Molly Mental =]]

Mm, like. Two things -
seances = senses,
controlive = controling.

I like your writing style. I prefer the part about the band to the part about Elizabeth, though. It seemed more... natural. But overall, I really think you did a good job. Keep it up and good luck with the contest! ^^

Updatee

O.o I loved your spazziness, dude. o.O
Anyway, awesome chapter!
Can't wait to read the rest of it!