We Grew Up - Comments

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    The apology scene was.....odd, to say the least. He was being this big asshole and then she yelled two sentences at him and he was all apologetic. Life doesn't happen that way. And, as much as I want to think Lexi and Travis are cute, I still find the apology way too rushed and that makes it hard to believe. Sorry, but that's just how I see it.
    March 27th, 2011 at 04:13pm
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    I love it! You have a great writing style and I love how Travis and Lexinare just so obviously fantastic for each other :)
    March 27th, 2011 at 10:30am
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    Travis is such an interesting character
    I love Savannah :)
    Lexi is awesome :)
    I'm glad they're getting along
    March 27th, 2011 at 04:55am
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    Travis RULES. The Red Sox are the best and The Yankees suck baaaaad.
    Just sayin'.
    ;)
    March 8th, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • Emochick920

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    Travis is a douche.
    March 6th, 2011 at 05:43am
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    Lol oh the awkwardness XD
    January 29th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • Piranha Priya

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    Love it <3
    Lexi sounds like a sweetheart.
    And savannah seems so genuine.
    Travis on the othe hand...
    Update soon!
    *subscribes*
    January 28th, 2011 at 10:35pm
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    I really hope you write the garage sales in the next chapter. They sound interesting :P
    January 28th, 2011 at 10:16pm
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    This was good! (:
    January 28th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • Emochick920

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    I love what she says XD
    January 28th, 2011 at 03:24am
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    You really need to stop begging for commenters. Or, excuse me, asking for them. All you're doing is turning your readers away from commenting you. It's immature and selfish and so many other things, and the fact that you won't even update for your loyal readers (us 3 commenters) just because you haven't gotten enough comments/feedback...that's low. That's really low.

    So, as nicely as I can say it: get over it. People will comment if they want to comment. Okay? Okay.
    January 17th, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • Emochick920

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    Lol Travis is gonna get it XD
    January 11th, 2011 at 04:07am
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    I lurrrrrrve thissss :D
    January 11th, 2011 at 12:43am
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    Aww poor lexi. where is Travis?!?!?!
    January 10th, 2011 at 02:37am
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    I wanna know what Travis said :L
    Really badly.
    I don't know why.
    Your story is really awesome. I don't have any criticsm... yet xD
    Keep up the good work :D
    January 10th, 2011 at 02:19am
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    ^ I agree
    December 15th, 2010 at 01:46am
  • Emochick920

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    I want more!!!! I have to know what happens
    December 13th, 2010 at 11:51pm
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    WELL WHAT DID TRAVIS SAY?!

    Jeez. I love this! I really want more, like now :D
    December 12th, 2010 at 04:20pm
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    Lexi I cant wait for more *anxious face*
    December 12th, 2010 at 05:38am
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    I love Lexiana's name! And I really like how you're using personal experience to inspire you. I know that's really hard to do sometimes and I think you're really brave to do this. It's a great read so far. Consider me subscribed (:
    December 10th, 2010 at 01:31am