We seem so invincible, but the truth is so cold. - Comments

  • A7X-PapaRoachLvr

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    Wow. That was simply amazing. I cried. It was hard to read but it was very good. I'm sure Jimmy was a lot people's hero. He will foREVer be in my heart. <3
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:51am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Fuuck! I cried, this was beautiful! <3 I love it! <3
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:35am
  • pekigirl

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    oh my god.. I can't stop crying.. that beginning, wow.. beautiful
    August 1st, 2012 at 12:29am
  • The Rev.

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    Well, I know that if I wasn't so ehh about crying, I would be right now. That was so beautifully written, darling. ): I'm sad now!
    January 10th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • Zero;

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    YOU CAN'T TAKE HIM!" He screamed, "PLEASE, DON'T TAKE HIM."
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    yeah, that sentemce right there.....made me CRY LIKE NO TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    this was so beautifully written, i loved it very much.
    <3
    xo,
    Dev
    December 19th, 2010 at 09:00pm
  • EnigmaInLove

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    Jay you're seriously the best author I've ever come across. It doesn't matter what subject you write about, you make it amazing. This was no different. It's so sad! I could actually picture them at the funeral... I wouldda been a mess if I had to find my best friend dead.
    foREVer <3
    ps, have you wrote your Dear Jimmy letter? I started mine in HCP yesterday (:
    December 18th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • Johnny Christ;

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    Wow, I am seriously sobbing right now. The reality of this; the fact that they did, indeed, have to lower Jimmy into the ground. That even though Jimmy was so much higher in life than the rest of us, he's technically below us: buried 6 feet under.

    I find it funny because every time I see a duck, I chase is and every time I see a BWM, I scream at it! xD

    It's such a beautiful piece of writing and don't you say that it's not. It was so heartfelt and I can feel Jimmy with me right now. It's...strange. I haven't felt him with me since I updated Beautiful With Wings last. He's proud. He loves you, as well as the rest of the fans.

    What a wonderful oneshot. ♥
    December 10th, 2010 at 03:57am