I'd Be Lying If I Told You - Comments

  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    This is really really cute. I love how much Rian cares, and he's such a sweetie. :)
    Are you writing any more? I'd love to see what you come up with. :)
    December 11th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • isles and glaciers

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    This is really, really good. I don't even know what to say. But seriously, it's really good :D
    Can't wait to read more of it.
    December 11th, 2010 at 01:10am
  • thelatestwhim

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    This was seriously amazing. You've incorporated all the little details perfectly and it was just..amazing. Awesome job!!
    December 10th, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • atl340

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    I just read it again and that comment sucked so I'm gunna write another one.
    First I think it's awesome that you were inspired enough to do this, and it's crazy cool to read because I don't know, it's really interesting to read how the events that I didn't actually write might have gone down. I love how you've incorporated all the little facts in there too, like about Rian coming over on Tuesdays and stuff. I just think this is amazing and all the details from poison you put in are incredible.
    awesome job, really :D
    December 10th, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • atl340

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    omigosh that was awesome :D
    Ah you're a great writer! ^.^
    December 10th, 2010 at 07:17pm