This is really really cute. I love how much Rian cares, and he's such a sweetie. :) Are you writing any more? I'd love to see what you come up with. :)
I just read it again and that comment sucked so I'm gunna write another one. First I think it's awesome that you were inspired enough to do this, and it's crazy cool to read because I don't know, it's really interesting to read how the events that I didn't actually write might have gone down. I love how you've incorporated all the little facts in there too, like about Rian coming over on Tuesdays and stuff. I just think this is amazing and all the details from poison you put in are incredible. awesome job, really :D
Are you writing any more? I'd love to see what you come up with. :)