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  • Mama Kas

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    I loved to see where all of this is going.
    January 12th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • sweetblasphemy7x

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    I'm commenting solely based off your summary;
    There are two colleges that could possibly be the setting for this; Berklee school of music in boston, or Berkeley college in NY/N
    I'm assuming its the second one, however, its not known for music.
    and your summary had major grammatical errors. I'm just letting you know.
    I'm going to give the rest of your story the benifit of the doubt, and please don't take this comment personally, this is mere constructive criticism.
    :)
    December 27th, 2010 at 01:09am
  • WaterWisp

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    Yayyyy =) different POV!!!
    You're both really good writers =P
    Shame ya can't update everyday xD
    Though I gotta say.... progress is soooo slow..... =( I wish the two parties would hurry up and clash already =P

    But hey!!!!! You guys are writing it!!!!
    Loved the new chap, and can't wait for more!!!
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    Until next time
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    MWAHAHAAAA =P
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:57pm
  • jadebutterfly95

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    loved the new chapter!!
    December 12th, 2010 at 05:29am
  • WaterWisp

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    Nice edit!
    And awesome! You can move onto the next chapter now.... right????
    December 11th, 2010 at 05:46am
  • WaterWisp

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    HHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYY!!!!!!
    Nice start!!! Ugh... I'm not brilliant at commenting... but hey, I like it, think it's good, and I want to read more!!

    =D
    December 10th, 2010 at 03:02pm