Wow did not see that ending comming, very dark i like it.
June 18th, 2011 at 08:09pm
Creeeeepy. :D I like how you incorporated the lyrics into the dialogue. And the ending was completely unexpected, as I don't know the song.
Only thing, it was a bit hard to read, so I'd suggest putting spaces in between the paragraphs, just so everything is separated and it's easier to read.
But well done, loved it.