Invincible - Comments

Wow.....wow ......wow,,,, i cried reading this...

Oh my gosh.. That was so well written. I felt his pain; and honestly, I cried. :'(
Amazing story. (: You're a great writer. Makes me think a lot about life..
(: You're the bestt!~

Wow. This was amazing. I cried so much :( You're a really great writer x

So thats what was in the box...wow...and now its over...I admit, Im kinda sad it is. I loved this story...and I also admit, I teared up. You are such a phenomenal writer. Truly gifted.

So beautiful...
I loved it, amazing job. <3

Wow.
This is so sad, but in a way kinda not.
It's like he's remembering the good times he had with her.
I really REALLY liked it.

It amazes me how you can capture every single emotion perfectly. The way this story makes me feel, as a reader, is just beautiful because I feel everything Brian feels. I'm attached to both characters now and I really don't want this to end so soon.

Oh.wow...this was amazing too. I really love how you can capture the emotions and explain them without over-doing it. It's one of my favorite things about your stories...can't wait for the last chapter

This is so sad. I didn't cry, but I almost did. :'( You can really feel what he's going through, and your character - at least, how you portray Brian - is so relatable. Your words are perfect, the way you word your sentences and string them together. It flows perfectly. <3

I can't wait for the last chapter to find out what's in the box!

I actually started to cry. This is really, really good. I absolutely love it. :)

Awe..this is soo sad...I love it though. Can't wait for more

The swelling feeling that I would get in my chest when the memories surfaced once in a blue moon, and the tears that would sting at my eyes when I saw her face in my mind, and the way that my breath would hitch in the back of my throat when I remembered that it was just another day in the present, and she was stuck forever in the past.

This bit right there, that's what made me fall in love with this sad story. I love it, you're a great writer. Update soon please :)

Oh my gosh this is so sad. :'( Please update again soon, I can't wait to read the next two chapters. I have a feeling I'm going to cry during this story!

Can't wait for this :)