For the Love of Him - Comments

I lurves itt!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank u all so much! I'm adding a party scen right now :)

This is amazing! I luv ur story! :)

I love the story! Plot is excellent, and the description is pretty good, but I would try to make the speech a bit more natural. It all seems very scripted and not at all like how people would really talk if that makes any sense. I absolutely LOVE the plt and characters though!

omg it was good i love it write more :)

I love your writing style! The narrative isn't too overdone, but it's still gorgeously descriptive. :3 Your characters are so realistic too! I love it (: x

So? Will you update???
It's good! I like how its descriptive
I have to admit, it started off a little cliche, but it got more drama when Ade storms out of Raheem's place!
More drama the better!
you should change up the layout ;)
Hoping for a new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thx everyone!

I love your update!! keep it up:) It's a really good story!

I only read chapter 1 but it seems really good well done and keep up the good work!! <3

Your story was beautiful yet sensational. The story moved me in many ways. I liked how you putted every detail into form and you have a great personality.

Even though there are only 5 chapters in this story, I can tell that there's a lot of potential. Please update soon! :]

~Lilith

That was great. I really enjoyed it:D

Wow. It's not the kind of genre I would usually read, so I can't offer you any good advice, but it's really cool. (:

Yes, i plan on writing more very soon (: thank you all for reading, commenting, and subscribing! <3

well that was just cute :)

Great start, you're very descriptive.You need a little spell checking but that's it.
Ima subscribe..are you gonna write anymore for this?

Wow! Awesome story!! :3 The beginning on how they met is sooo cute!!!

Thank you soo much :D

oh goodness.!!! love you story can't wait for you to write more. HAHA gucci jeans :]