Six Words to Show the World - Comments

As a student of Creative writing, i appreciate what you're trying to do, and i wholeheartedly encourage you :)

But; The words seem like sayings to me, I think you could make it a story, now i know you said no plot or anything, but stories don't need plots but they do need substance. I feel like things are just being said at me, rather then drawing me in.

IMHO you have a lot of talent and opportunity and a great idea. If you attempt this again I think you should take this into account :)

Never feel discouraged, sometimes it's just about getting you're feeling across =)

plus,it might be good to read about but its not a story.
:)

i'm an editor

this is not a story!

IF ANYONE TRYS TO REPORT THIS THEY'LL WAKE UP IN BED NEXT TO A BLOOD THIRSTY LION!!!

Now nobody would like that now, would they?

I love this! Why would anyone report it?

Absolutlely love this!:)

Wow, Really creative

My friend Carol (The Molextah) has a line for you: The Molextah is always watching you.

I love this!! Really creative!! Here's a line for you: Forever only lasted four years? Nice.

i love this :D

this is amazing!

"the hopelessly hopeful are hopeful enough"
do you listen to fall out boy? :D
i love this story, its like poetry to me

I love it. It's something new. Something entirely original

this is the most interesting "story" I have ever found on Mibba..
I like it!

I love the creativity and the depth of this project. I'll be sure to spread the word about it. :]

thanks! :D
i have no intentions of stopping. these are probably the best i've written so far.
thank you, everyone who's reading :]

Golly, this is beastin! Six words? Outrageous. You have yourself a new subscriber! Pleaseee continue? [:

Golly, this is beastin! Six words? Outrageous. You have yourself a new subscriber! Pleaseee continue? [:

thank you :]
your comments make me very happy, guys. thank you for taking the time to read the stories.