NO. YOU CANNOT STOP THERE! Incredible story, truly, and I never say things of the such. I love the new direction you're going in and am anxiously awaiting an update :) x
You have no idea how much I smiled when I saw that this had been updated (: My heart was beating way to fast after reading that... I'm scared easily, as it turns out. You managed to make me feel like I was actually there, your writing is too awesome for words.
I bet they're getting sprayed with ice cold water, but I've been wrong... XD Awesome update, I can't wait for the next one!!! Haha, not hard to believe most of them are from the psych- *cough* o *cough* ward!! Love it!! XP
That was one fucking creepy cliffhanger. I'd've screamed like a bitch and started throwing punches if they'd made me do that. Awesome update, keep it up.
I'm half exctied because you updated and miffed(love that word atm) because there's never enough. Awesome chapter Nemma. Are they getting sexed up the bumhole? :L
It kinda like Frank this wild! It's kinda hot. Nope, it is definitely hot! I want more! Please. This is my favorite Frankie story, besides your other one. Your writing is amazing. You have to write more soon! I'm a junkie that needs a fix! Subbing! <3
It kinda like Frank this wild! It kinda hot. Nope, it is definitely hot! I want more! Please. This is my favorite Frankie story, besides your other one. Your writing is amazing. You have to write more soon! I'm a junkie that needs a fix! Subbing! <3
repition of the phrase 'two years' worked wonderfully in creating tension. The reader accepts the fact before the character. How ironic!
"Nothing like a disaster to exhume the community spirit." Trollz, that's so try. The irony of the interior monologue and the genuine stoic exterior made the character relateable.
“She should try to show some remorse, also.” Try being the opperative word? Wonderful.
This is written so well that I'm completely fascinated. The plot is really unique, as far as I'm concerned. Most importantly, it didn't waste my time. Tip of the hat to you, ma'am. SUBBED :D