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  • Morning Air

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    No more updates then? ):
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • PinkRabbit

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    please update, you've probably long forgotten this story but it's soooo good :D i'll love you forever!!! xx
    August 1st, 2011 at 01:14am
  • Hookedoncyanide

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    NO. YOU CANNOT STOP THERE!
    Incredible story, truly, and I never say things of the such.
    I love the new direction you're going in and am anxiously awaiting an update :) x
    February 17th, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • Miscreation

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    You have no idea how much I smiled when I saw that this had been updated (:
    My heart was beating way to fast after reading that... I'm scared easily, as it turns out.
    You managed to make me feel like I was actually there, your writing is too awesome for words.
    February 2nd, 2011 at 08:49am
  • Toy Robot

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    I bet they're getting sprayed with ice cold water, but I've been wrong... XD Awesome update, I can't wait for the next one!!! Haha, not hard to believe most of them are from the psych- *cough* o *cough* ward!! Love it!! XP
    February 2nd, 2011 at 12:15am
  • mcrluver-92

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    im crappin my pants for more! any idea when that will be?
    February 1st, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • man overboard!

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    That was one fucking creepy cliffhanger. I'd've screamed like a bitch and started throwing punches if they'd made me do that. Awesome update, keep it up.
    February 1st, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • KittyGrimm

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    I'm half exctied because you updated and miffed(love that word atm) because there's never enough.
    Awesome chapter Nemma.
    Are they getting sexed up the bumhole? :L
    February 1st, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    February 1st, 2011 at 10:39pm
  • Pineapplez

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    I love this concept! It's a lot different from other MCR fanfiction. Thanks for finding hte time to update. :)
    February 1st, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    It kinda like Frank this wild! It's kinda hot. Nope, it is definitely hot! I want more! Please. This is my favorite Frankie story, besides your other one.
    Your writing is amazing. You have to write more soon!
    I'm a junkie that needs a fix! Subbing! <3
    January 31st, 2011 at 03:50am
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    It kinda like Frank this wild! It kinda hot. Nope, it is definitely hot! I want more! Please. This is my favorite Frankie story, besides your other one.
    Your writing is amazing. You have to write more soon!
    I'm a junkie that needs a fix! Subbing! <3
    January 31st, 2011 at 03:50am
  • KittyGrimm

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    When well when will I get getting an update?
    I swear togod if you havent updated by the 16th I will tickle you to death and you shant see MCR.
    January 30th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • PinkRabbit

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    i love this still!!! please write more soon :) i've been checking for an update forever x
    January 3rd, 2011 at 04:49pm
  • astudyinchuck

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    repition of the phrase 'two years' worked wonderfully in creating tension. The reader accepts the fact before the character. How ironic!

    "Nothing like a disaster to exhume the community spirit." Trollz, that's so try. The irony of the interior monologue and the genuine stoic exterior made the character relateable.

    “She should try to show some remorse, also.” Try being the opperative word? Wonderful.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 03:40pm
  • conk

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    Thanks guys! ^^
    December 31st, 2010 at 02:24pm
  • pseudonym.

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    This is written so well that I'm completely fascinated. The plot is really unique, as far as I'm concerned. Most importantly, it didn't waste my time. Tip of the hat to you, ma'am. SUBBED :D
    December 31st, 2010 at 07:02am
  • Morning Air

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    Oh dear.
    I'm not one to leave comments often but this story really deserves it.
    The concept is great and your writing is outstanding. i love it. (:

    Please, do keep updating, lovely. (:

    xx
    December 26th, 2010 at 12:28am
  • PinkRabbit

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    wowwwww!!! cool, if i was crazy that's exactly what i'd do :D

    but alas, i am not :/... sooooo i'll congratulate you on doing such a good job of portraying a mental hospital.
    loved it! x
    December 24th, 2010 at 08:32pm
  • Toy Robot

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    Haha! This is genius!! Can't wait until the next update...and I am curious as to how they 'got out' !!! XD Keep writing, this is amazing!
    December 24th, 2010 at 08:27pm