Nice Guys Finish Last - Comments

I believe I've read every one of your gabilliam five, and this is by far my favorite. Best part has to be that you keep writing that Gabe always expects an answer, I gave a shiver every time I read that. Beautiful, really amazing job. :)

I absolutely loved this! Great job :)

Omg, this story was just beyond amazing, like im all quiet right now and in shock. Is it sick that im not so sad that bilvie killed michael? I love michael aswell, but williams is gabe, and he should have never touched a gangsters girl ;) i love love love this story, thank you so much for writing it ^^ and it would be awsometasic if you wrote a sequel :D since they might get married and all, i need more of this story, the ending teased me D:

Amazing. I mean amazing. I loved it. All of it.

I love it. Well worth all the time you spent on it. :)

chapter two- everything's in italics. just saying!
13 para's down-ish.
'can't'

YOU POSTED IT. :D