I think this is the best update of all! it's funnny, smart, sexy, and very descriptive! i LOVED it :D <3 plz continue! Colton is my fav character now, even tho he may be bad. i like bad boyz, LOL! and this new character Athan, sounds very interesting....
This update was GREAT! very good. with the exception of some words not being spaced out like this --> hateWitches, tomy, etc. the story was perfect :) great job, update soon, hun! i'm subsribing.
Yay! first comment :) That was absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVED it :) <3 very descriptive and well-written. the story line seems to just flow along, and i really like that. i didn;t see any mistakes, i though it was perfect :) UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol :)
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