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  • understand

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    I mean I got that I had freaked him out,
    *I mean, I got that I had freaked him out,

    Now both sucky aaaaaaaand ferris have dates
    August 8th, 2011 at 05:49pm
  • Frank_Iero

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    i love you so much!!!!

    i really enjoyed this chapter. i liked that Ferris is going to go on the date with his new man! he deserves to be as happy as he can, specially since i'm feeling how closet case Owen is right now. i mean if he cant man up then Ferris doesn't need him. idk, though i am really looking forward to baby finding out Ferris is gay, i'm not sure if or when you have it planned but i think it's going to be good, or at least i hope it will be!
    anyways. much love! this story is wonderful and i'm overly happy it won't be ending soon! can't wait for more :D
    August 8th, 2011 at 09:15am
  • eragorn122

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    Words just can't express how much I truly love this story. They all seem so realistic, flawed in all the right ways. Ferris is just like the perfect main character. I love the twists and turns and events of this story and I can't just get enough of it. I get overly excited for each update. You're grammar was spot on this update, I didn't really notice any of the little tiny errors you sometimes had before.
    August 8th, 2011 at 08:58am
  • Eugene.

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    Oh my goodness! I’m so sorry I’ve missed four whole updates! I really feel terrible; I haven’t read anything all month. I’ll try my best to leave you a comment that includes all four chapters ☺

    Chapter 15

    "More hassle than it's worth, what is that even supposed to mean?" Tracey questioned Yeah? What’s that supposed to mean?!

    "Oh Ferris, you can't look at it like that, because it is worth it. No matter how much trouble you get in to, or who says what, it is worth it. Eventually you will find the boy of your dreams, and you'll fall in love, and make lots of metaphorical babies, and travel the world together, and live somewhere that doesn't debate the legality of gay marriage, but accepts it with open arms." Love Tracey. She and I are very much alike, I think…

    "Stop being a baby Ferris it's a vibrator, you aren't five you're a big boy now. Old enough to say words like vibrator, and even old enough to use one. And there is no reason what-so-ever that Baby would ever find yours."

    "Mine, no that thing is not mine, it's yours," I told her flatly before walking out in to the kitchen. I heard the crinkle of a plastic bag as she followed me.
    Bahahahaa, oh Ferris. Really, would you expect any other reaction?

    "Hide that," I demanded her. I’m dying laughing right now

    Chapter 16

    "Johnny and June, like Johnny Cash and June Carter?" I asked him. <3 Johnny and June <3

    and asked me to come with him to take care of his friends dogs. I'm not really sure why he needed the help, from what I'd seen so far both dogs were exceptionally well behaved, and even if they weren't I wouldn't have been much help. I think I know why ;)

    I stepped a little bit closer to Owen, not so much that he would find it suspicious, but I liked the idea of people thinking we were like together or whatever. It was cheesy and kind of lame, but I don't even care. I would have done the exact same thing ☺

    He was getting some stuff in the like soap section and I wandered over to the toy section. I found this stupid Iron Man mask, which naturally I had to try on. I mean personally I thought Iron Man was sort of a douchebag of the superhero world, but it was still a cool mask, plus the Darth Vader mask was too small for my head. I was about to pick up a light saber when Owen approached me.

    "You're worse than a child," he said and shook his head.

    "Whatever you're just jealous because I know how to have fun, unlike you,"
    YEAH OWEN! :P

    "It's not impromptu, or a trip, we're at Walmart not the Grand Canyon. And I'll buy you the Dinosaur Egg if you must have it so badly." Cause he loooooves Ferris <3

    Also there was a package waiting for me, well technically it said Ferris Bueller.WIN

    Screw it, there's no going back now, then I basically launch myself at Owen and kiss him. Well it's more like me attacking his face with mine, because I am possibly the least coordinated person on the planet.

    The kiss, or face mashing, did not last long at all. Owen was not even moving, and as soon as I stepped back he picked up his stuff and just walked out. SHIT!
    Oh dear…

    Ice cream always helps, always

    "I do know that, and I also know that ice cream knows no gender or orientation, only heartbreak. So I say we get us some ice cream and watch crappy movies, because there is nothing more healing, I don't care how manly you are. And while we gorge ourselves one ice cream and watch said crappy movies we can devise a plan on how to woo Owen." I like this Natalie girl

    I mean you had just like molested his face Hrm, yeah, Ferris… You kinda did…

    "It means when they have gay sex he's on the receiving end," Tracey said bluntly.

    "Oh, hmm, I learned something today."
    HAHAHAHAHA. Oh dear. I don’t think that was supposed to be so funny. But it was.

    Chapter 17

    "Tracey I didn't think of anything, I just told Scotty what I was doing because he asked, and I thought he already knew. I told you this isn't some crazy plot or scheme, it's simply me escorting my friend, nothing more."

    "Just keep telling yourself that."
    Silly Feris

    I've seen She's the Man a few times, and I have to admit I was kind of disappointed that it wasn't more like that. That’s the only cotillion I’ve ever seen, too! And that even had a brawl! So great!

    Chapter 18


    "Hooray?" I said not understanding his excitement.

    "Yes hooray. You told me Baby said I could stay for a week whenever I wanted to right? And now I have a week to come and stay, I already talked it over with my parents, and they said it's totally cool... well I mean they said they wanted to talk to your sister first to make sure she was really okay with it."

    "Dude that's so kindergarten, don't forget to bring Mr. Snugglekins and your sippy cup," I teased him.

    "But which sippy cup should I bring? The dinosaur one, or the princess peach one?"
    Only with best friends <3

    I looked in to this, and I'm totally taking a train! I'm going to be like fuckin' Harry Potter! I’M GOING TO SEE HARRY POTTER TONIGHT!!!

    "I, uh, I'm sorry, I didn't realize you had, uhm, company," Tracey said I saw that she was blushing brightly. HAHA! I’d probably think the same thing!

    "Oh no it's fine, you should have been here last night though it was magical," I said wriggling my eyes brows at her suggestively. Her face scrunched up in disgust. "Three hours of pure magic. Raw and hot and, Ow!" I said after Duckie kicked me in the leg."What the hell?"

    "You wish you could tap this," he grumbled and kicked in my direction again, but I moved this time.
    Ferrisssssss!

    Either I was completely delusional or he was flirting with me, because he had said they were sexy earlier, and now he was saying I could wear them so that meant that he thought I was sexy. Ow ow!

    "I don't know, I quiet like my Converse.You're wearing Converse," I attempted to flirt back. I say attempted because flirting wasn't something I had done much (or any) of, so I couldn't imagine I was great at it.Lmao, silly Ferris <3

    Plus it's possible that you might qualify for a friend of an employee discount. Just to be sure though you should probably give me your phone number," he said with a smile. I thought about it for a moment. This was the first time a guy had asked me for my number, but Marc seemed like a really cool guy ☹ Owen! Not Marcel! OWEN

    "My phone is at the registers, so you could add it while I checked you out," Marc said and then a second later his face went red with embarrassment. "I mean while I ring up your shoes," he explained even though I knew what he had meant. Even though that was kind of cute…

    "Thanks. I should go though, I have to find my friends," I told him.

    "Two girls and that guy from earlier?" he asked.

    "Yeah, how'd you know?"

    "They're standing behind you pretending to be interested in children's pajama's."
    Typical. They’re wonderful lol

    I love this story so much, and I’m sad that if you go with that specific ending then it’ll end so soon, but I understand… I guess… Kind of…

    I’m so sorry again for not commenting for four chapters!
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:13am
  • Pertisimo

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    I have to say this story is fabulous, I loved the most recent chapter, the part about the children;s pyjamas was hilarious xD
    Oh, and I adore Ferris' picture, it suits him very well hahaha! Your characters are all very believable and I love the humour you've put into this story :) I kinda like Marc, it will be interesting to see where things go with those two, but what about Owen?!
    It's sad to hear its coming to an end if you don't think of an alternative ending, because I wil honestly miss reading it!
    Looking forward to the next update! :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:27pm
  • eragorn122

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    **PAGE CLAIM**
    Well I probably took up about half of it just now. >.>
    July 25th, 2011 at 08:28am
  • eragorn122

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    I have many things to say. :)
    First and foremost I completely got so distracted with this story that I stopped flirtig with a really cute guy. So yeah. I really love this story. <3
    Second that's the background I meant. I love it and it seems to fit sooo well.
    Third the way you pictured Duckie is adorable. I kinda pictured him a lot closer to nerdy. Your pic for Owen I think fits your description amazingly. and that pic for Ferris has to be one of the most adorable and at the same time sexiest guys I have ever seen.
    Fourth. I mentioned it but I'm saying it again. I LOVE this story! You are an extremely talented writer and I look forward to this story being updated every week. <3 I wish I could wrote half as well as you can. :)
    Fifthly? I think you should do a second check on some of your grammar I think you acckdently dropped a few words here and there.
    Sixthly? Hehehe Ferris gave someone his digits. Made me giggle and smile. :) I can't wait to see how that turns out. :D. While I think of Duckie as a creeper still I rather liked him a lot more this last chapter. I can't wait to see how Owen reacts when he finds out about Ferris's new interest and I think Tracey might be the one to tell him.
    Seventhly (I promise I'm almost done) I honestly don't want to see this story over and done with in a few chapters without hope of a sequel. I really love Ferris a lot. <3 he's probably one of my top favorite characters because he just honestly feels like a real person so much. Like sometimes it feels like you are telling a story of a close friends experiences rather then making it up.
    That's all. Hope you like ginormous comments. ^_^
    P.s. Harry Potter references <3
    July 25th, 2011 at 08:26am
  • Invalid.

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    Please think of anything that makes this story longer. Thank you.
    July 25th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • Frank_Iero

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    i am overly upset that this is going to be ending soon. i might just cry when it does, but i love reading it anyways. i'm looking forward for the next chapter!!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 07:40am
  • understand

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    FERRIS, YOU SLY DOG.
    :]
    July 25th, 2011 at 07:16am
  • Frank_Iero

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    i love this story so much! it just keeps getting better and better with each chapter! for sure one of my favorites right now :D
    July 19th, 2011 at 04:00am
  • Ammydot19

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    Love this story! update soon if possible. I would like to see the characters so please have a character pictures.
    July 17th, 2011 at 09:11am
  • understand

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    character pictures?
    YES POR FAVOR.
    July 16th, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • Azarias

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    Ah, Tracey and her schemes. As meddlesome as she is I still love her. Then again she wouldn't be Tracey if she didn't meddle. I can just see Ferris awkwardly standing there with this lost and helpless look on his face while getting his measurements. X] I loved the whole argument about the underwear. Seriously, my brother's friends walk around the house in nothing but their underwear most of the time. I wish I had bat mam underwear. I'm starting to like Scotty. I didn't really have an opinion of him before but I'm getting to like his character. Speaking of character, I don't really feel that a character page is needed. You definitely know who's who in this story but they can certainly be a nice little add on. Plus it's always fun to see how the author describes their characters outside of the story setting. Thanks for updating so soon. Can't wait for more! <3
    July 16th, 2011 at 02:50pm
  • eragorn122

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    Love the story, I honestly preferred the original layout.
    Awkward times, and I love how Ferris isn't trying to make Owen jealous but totally ends up doing everything possible to make him jealous. <3
    July 16th, 2011 at 10:27am
  • Jack-Likes-Thrust

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    I'd love it if you would put up a character page.
    I'm not good at imagining a character unfortanatly. :/.
    Anyway, I love your story! Ferris is awesome.
    He reminds me of my friend Ronald (Such an awesome name..)
    Update soon please!:)
    July 16th, 2011 at 10:20am
  • nez

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    i know this is totally ramdon but.... could you change the layout?
    July 16th, 2011 at 07:05am
  • NERD_ALERT.

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    I love this!! Seriously I do
    I love the names you used
    I love your style of writing
    It's just really great!!
    Update soon please
    July 12th, 2011 at 03:20pm
  • Nicole_789

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    Omg please update! i love love this so much :)))!!!!
    This is like really good <333
    July 12th, 2011 at 12:39am
  • summerhopes

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    update! D:
    July 12th, 2011 at 12:20am