Oh, Little Child So Broken and Wild - Comments

into_your_icy_blues:

Aww, yay! That was cute.
Uberly cute. ^.^
Heheh... They made love...
I half expected Cary and Sara to start doing things since listening to Eric moanis would be so amazingly hott.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter. *is very excited*
I would submit myself for the new character... But I doubt I'd be chosen. Much pretty girls read this story than me.Self esteem issues...

Haha ^^ If you want to apply just do :P You're a pretty girl too, so why not?
And expecting Cary and Sara to do things, leads to the question supposed to be at the next update :tehe: Don't expect us to do things coming to the sexual things though O.o I can't write femmeslash (I think) and I would never be able to stop giggle :XD

Aww, yay! That was cute.
Uberly cute. ^.^
Heheh... They made love...
I half expected Cary and Sara to start doing things since listening to Eric moanis would be so amazingly hott.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter. *is very excited*
I would submit myself for the new character... But I doubt I'd be chosen. Much pretty girls read this story than me.Self esteem issues...

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I love this story!
You HAVE to update. NOW. PLEASE.
*pouts*
please?
<3
Eric

awr, they finally admitted they made love at the end *grins* cute.

i can't wait for the next chapter, this story is amazingly written.

Izzie
xoxo

that made my heart melt.

& i agree with the poster above me.
it was so sweet.

i really can't wait for the next chapter.

xo.

I love how they actually admit to making love in the end ^_^

xoxo

Well I really fell behind...
But I'm caught up now! =D
I loved the updates. Sorry I can't think of anything to say at the moment... Daft Punk is playing.

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jepha_drag_queen:

I never realized how much Tessa looks like Skinny. XD

I don't know if I should take that as a compliment or an insult......
But I blushed so much! *Bows to Lord Lasher*

Heh, and I love the story so far...
(I've gotten to the chapter with me, but I will finish the story by tomorrow evening.)

Hehe I'm in it. :tehe:

Guess I should start on the next chapters. =p

Cary BowTie:

Yeah, the loss of a teenage narcissit would have been devestating ^^ Jk, I promise that he won't get pregnantin this story. :roll:

hah, well, at least he's still here
& horny
& beautiful.
so it's all good.
:P

BUT AAAARGH
everytime i read a chapter
i get all frustrated when i finish.
xD
it's so good.
. . . especially this chapter.

you chose an evil time to end that one.
xDDD

i love this story, very funny, more soon?

AttentionWHORE;;:

NOOO!
DON'T SCARE HIM AWAY!
D:
;___;

though, tbh, it would be pretty comical if he got pregnant.
:lmfao

but he can't die.
that'd be such a loss to the world.
;__;

Yeah, the loss of a teenage narcissit would have been devestating ^^ Jk, I promise that he won't get pregnantin this story. :roll:

NOOO!
DON'T SCARE HIM AWAY!
D:
;___;

though, tbh, it would be pretty comical if he got pregnant.
:lmfao

but he can't die.
that'd be such a loss to the world.
;__;

didnt know cooking could be that hot ... ;)
i want more ... more ... MORE!!

He's not too beautiful to die. No one is. Everyone dies :]
But KittyCat's death would be tragic.

Oi, this is amazinggg.
More soon, yeah? :]

I was looking at the banner and just noticed that Whip looks
like he's about ot jump Cat, and Cat looks like he's about to pass
out or something. XD

Unicorn.:

“You got make up!?” Screeching Eric flew up from the man’s lap. “Where, where? Why haven’t you said anything? You’ve let me look like a hobo this long!?”

I laughed so hard, I almost fell off the chair.

:lmfao
hah, yeah.
that was fucking classic.
fucking being the operative word.

cat is just too adorable, as i've said a million times.

this story is just the best.

JOHNNY AND TUOMAS! YAYYY :]

“You got make up!?” Screeching Eric flew up from the man’s lap. “Where, where? Why haven’t you said anything? You’ve let me look like a hobo this long!?”

I laughed so hard, I almost fell off the chair.

jepha_drag_queen:

Cary BowTie:

I have no idea which you talk about O.o
I looked through everything and the only thing I could find is that I've forgot to make it kursiv >_>

Damn, O_o That's one hell of a lot to correct *faints* I have 112 pages all and all XD

I put them in bold. =p
The only one I've seen so far is in chapter five where it says.
Whatever he said he only had to do, or say, it once and Eric immediately accomplished it, allowing Andreas to do practically everything he wanted. Something showing out to be a lot during a short time period…(Don’t understand this sentence.)

You have that much? :oops:
Even though I have so much to correct I still want more.

Heh, I've changed it now, Idk if it's more understandable, but yeah :p
You have pretty much got everything :p And I use Comic Sans when I write, making the letters more childish and bigger ^^ And they're pink :oops:
You'll get more. Soon :p