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  • z3ez

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    Cary BowTie:
    I have no idea which you talk about O.o
    I looked through everything and the only thing I could find is that I've forgot to make it kursiv >_>

    Damn, O_o That's one hell of a lot to correct *faints* I have 112 pages all and all XD
    I put them in bold. =p
    The only one I've seen so far is in chapter five where it says.
    Whatever he said he only had to do, or say, it once and Eric immediately accomplished it, allowing Andreas to do practically everything he wanted. Something showing out to be a lot during a short time period…(Don’t understand this sentence.)

    You have that much? :oops:
    Even though I have so much to correct I still want more. In Love
    February 22nd, 2008 at 07:12pm
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    jepha_drag_queen:
    You need to look over your chapters after I send them to you because I make little notes for you to change sentences but you don't see them and left them in there. :XD

    I have 50 pages of this to still correct on my word. >___>
    I have no idea which you talk about O.o
    I looked through everything and the only thing I could find is that I've forgot to make it kursiv >_>

    Damn, O_o That's one hell of a lot to correct *faints* I have 112 pages all and all XD
    February 22nd, 2008 at 06:57pm
  • z3ez

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    You need to look over your chapters after I send them to you because I make little notes for you to change sentences but you don't see them and left them in there. :XD

    I have 50 pages of this to still correct on my word. >___>
    February 22nd, 2008 at 06:24pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    Aw, Eric's such a Goddamn cutie!
    ...And I'm a weirdo...
    Gah, you wrote a Johnny/Tuomas?!?!!?
    *starts hunting for it*

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    February 22nd, 2008 at 02:31am
  • z3ez

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    YOU WROTE ONE AND DIDN'T TELL ME?

    That's evil, Cary. Just evil. I have to find it, now.
    Hehe I read it before everybody else. :cute:
    February 21st, 2008 at 11:53pm
  • kinney.

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    eric is just so dflkngfhIn Loveckhnfg
    i just wanna hug him.
    :cute:

    oooh, i can't wait for the next update.
    : D
    February 21st, 2008 at 11:33pm
  • Unicorn.

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    YOU WROTE ONE AND DIDN'T TELL ME?

    That's evil, Cary. Just evil. I have to find it, now.
    February 21st, 2008 at 09:50pm
  • z3ez

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    Fuking update grr.
    Erection time. XD
    It will be...nevermind. Shifty
    February 20th, 2008 at 07:11pm
  • kinney.

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    stripping eh?
    Shifty
    i like that idea.

    mmmh, andreas is just the best.
    though, tbh, who wouldn't want to keep eric in their house.

    : D
    too cute.

    & again:
    erection time.
    ftw
    February 19th, 2008 at 08:22pm
  • boychild.

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    Wow, cookies all the way to Sweden? What a effort >_>
    Do you send it with boat or stinky bus? :p Doesn't matter, he will not be a paparazzi!! Omg, Andreas as a paparazzi? That's worse than him as a horse trainer O_o
    And Andreas as cabdriver? I just got a really funny image XD
    Oh, come on! We all know he would be perfect as a paparazzi! Horse trainer? Uh... that's just.. disturbing. But seriously, Paparazzi or a cabdriver. I said I'll give you cookies. And they get to fly, fly through the air. Yes, they get to flyy! No stinky buses, I've had enough of them.

    I remember what Tuomas looks like, I just had to look at him again. He's pretty... OH! Tuomas Holopainen and Johnny Depp Slash. Someone write that, please.
    You have some serious disturbed ideas O_o When I try to imagine Andreas as cabdriver I just see him wearing a big yellow jacket and this ugly yellow cap >.< No

    And I don't want cookies :p I prefer cakes, big unhealthy cakes with much chocolate och whipped cream :D I'm p.m.s.ing, I'm allowed to eat wtf I want ^^

    Huh, just because of that I'll try and write some Tuomas/Johnny slash XD Can't promise anything do :p
    February 18th, 2008 at 09:00pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    jepha_drag_queen:
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    I loved it!!
    Eric's so friggin' cute! I want to eat him. ^_^
    Awh...Duck.
    You're not the only one that wants to eat him. >___>

    Why don't people like Andy being a dentist?
    He's like the perfect dentist. =p
    ^^Eric...
    Andreas makes the perfect dentist, like you said. Him as horse trainer would just be extremely disturbing...
    Ooh, yes Tuomas Holopainen/Johnny Depp slash... *drools slightly*
    Extreme linkage! I had to follow the links to his pics again. Not because I forgot what he looks like, I just wanted to see the prettyness again. ^_^
    “Oh, but baby,” Grinning Andreas watched after the teenager as he went through the room. “Your ass is so slapable.” .....XD
    I wanna see Eric strip! *giggles*

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    February 18th, 2008 at 06:53pm
  • Unicorn.

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    Cary BowTie:
    Wow, cookies all the way to Sweden? What a effort >_>
    Do you send it with boat or stinky bus? :p Doesn't matter, he will not be a paparazzi!! Omg, Andreas as a paparazzi? That's worse than him as a horse trainer O_o
    And Andreas as cabdriver? I just got a really funny image XD
    Oh, come on! We all know he would be perfect as a paparazzi! Horse trainer? Uh... that's just.. disturbing. But seriously, Paparazzi or a cabdriver. I said I'll give you cookies. And they get to fly, fly through the air. Yes, they get to flyy! No stinky buses, I've had enough of them.

    I remember what Tuomas looks like, I just had to look at him again. He's pretty... OH! Tuomas Holopainen and Johnny Depp Slash. Someone write that, please.
    February 18th, 2008 at 03:24pm
  • z3ez

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    I loved it!!
    Eric's so friggin' cute! I want to eat him. ^_^
    Awh...Duck.
    You're not the only one that wants to eat him. >___>

    Why don't people like Andy being a dentist?
    He's like the perfect dentist. =p
    February 17th, 2008 at 03:47am
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    =[
    i feel well bad for Cat
    i just wanna beat up all the guys who whored him ya know
    at least he is safe with Whip =]

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    good word

    xxxZoexxx
    February 16th, 2008 at 06:39pm
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    I'll find a better job for him. Believe me. Just give me a few minutes.

    Duck. "That's the biggest fucking duck I've ever seen. Stallion duck" xD I love The Rev...

    He could be a plumber? Or a cabdriver? A scientist? A cancer cure looking doctor? PAPARAZZI!! Oh, make him a paparazzi, PLEASE? I'll ship you cookies all the way to Sweden (which is not very far).
    Wow, cookies all the way to Sweden? What a effort >_>
    Do you send it with boat or stinky bus? :p Doesn't matter, he will not be a paparazzi!! Omg, Andreas as a paparazzi? That's worse than him as a horse trainer O_o
    And Andreas as cabdriver? I just got a really funny image XD
    February 16th, 2008 at 04:43pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    I loved it!!
    Eric's so friggin' cute! I want to eat him. ^_^
    Awh...Duck.

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    February 16th, 2008 at 01:01am
  • Unicorn.

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    jepha_drag_queen:
    I wonder how many people opened up google when you mentioned Gene. ^^
    I look foreward to this story everyday. It's so great/cute/amaing/sweetness.
    I thought of googling him, because I don't remember how he looks without makeup.
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    Dentist? Dentist?
    He is NOT a dentist! With all the jobs in the world, you chose a dentist? He's been a vet, for christ sake. DENTIST?
    :XD
    This comment is now classed as my favortie comment of all times XD

    Yeah, he's a dentist >_> Get over it :twisted: Do you have some better job for him then? :p
    I'll find a better job for him. Believe me. Just give me a few minutes.

    Duck. "That's the biggest fucking duck I've ever seen. Stallion duck" xD I love The Rev...

    He could be a plumber? Or a cabdriver? A scientist? A cancer cure looking doctor? PAPARAZZI!! Oh, make him a paparazzi, PLEASE? I'll ship you cookies all the way to Sweden (which is not very far).
    February 15th, 2008 at 09:21pm
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    I wonder how many people opened up google when you mentioned Gene. ^^
    I look foreward to this story everyday. It's so great/cute/amaing/sweetness.
    February 15th, 2008 at 05:29pm
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    That was sweet. I liked how Eric had to say 'duck' when he didn't want to answer a question. ^_^

    xoxo
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:37pm
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    ;__;
    okay, that last chapter almost made me cry.
    it was so sweet,
    but not in the way that makes you feel sick.
    it was just . . . nice.
    -sigh-
    In Love
    i'm beginning to really love this story.
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:13pm