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  • HailMisery

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    I love it:)

    I like the way you used the word it'd was different that the other two entries and that good:D

    But you have small grammar errors that are fixable.

    Two sexy guys playing together so hot.
    December 24th, 2010 at 04:01am
  • IceNineKiller

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    Absolutely amazing, dear. :)
    Thanks for joining mine and HailMisery's contest. :D

    Hope you enjoyed yourself.
    December 24th, 2010 at 02:20am
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