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  • D. Dixon

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    I really liked this idea. :] I could definitely see it be expanded into a full story. Good job!
    December 24th, 2010 at 12:56am
  • VengeanceBaby

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    I'm taking your comment virginity. I love the concept of this story. however the layout makes it a bit hard to read. if you could change it up a little bit that would be great. keep up the great writing. I enjoy it. =})
    December 22nd, 2010 at 08:08pm
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