I really love this story. :3 I was really happy that you updated. I feel bad for Gerard. :/ Can't they just get together already?! Poop. Aghhh, Update soon Love :) (Glad you're feeling better :])
OMG. You are such an amazing writer... So skilled, I'm actually left so face melted from this I can't form a full functioning beautiful comment. I apologize to how much it will suck but my mind is actually blown... And your concept of love and real life situations is so well developed, I only just found this, I hope you've not given up on it... More soon, I hope? Pfft xxxx
Okay so I was a little confused about the age part because I know nothing about MCR and I have no clue how old Gerard is x) Also I don't feel comfortable picturing him having sex so I read the story as original.
Anyways, I'm generally very picky about stories written in first person because so many sentences tend to start with "I" and it makes me cringe to see two sentences which are one after the other start with the same word. But I didn't see that in your story, so it's fine ^.^ (I thought the sentences were too short, though, but that's just me and my love for insanely long sentences.)
Overall, I like the story so far. I think the subject that you chose is interesting and different from what I usually see, so it's all good =)
OH MY GOD PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING THIS!!! WHEN I GOT TO THE NEWEST CHAPTER I WENT BACK AND RE-READ IT TWICE, PLEASE UPDATE!!! IM DESPERATE FOR THIS STORY!! HAHA :D