Holy FUCK!!!! You are an evil genius!!! I love this story!!!! It blows my mind! I couldn't believe that you had so many stars with only two chapters, but after reading it I understand!!!! Man, I've been thoroughly humbled by your writing skills. People tell me I'm a good writer, but you're on a whole nother level!!! It's not fair!!! Plus, I never thought it would happen, but your story made me blush! That doesn't happen to me! I'm thoroughly used to X-rated writing, but this was just insane! Thank you for being so amazing! (And sorry for my extreme enthusiasm... I just like your story.) :D
Awe! Bren and Ry are so damn adorable that it's almost sickening. But I love it! And I like the fact that even though Gerard is a whore, he still believes in love. It's sweet.
Wow. This is very interesting. Consider reading carefully through the chapter before posting, though. I found quite a few mistakes that bothered me. Not that i'm one to talk, but i was just throwing and idea out there. But other than the few minor mistakes and typos, this chapter was really good and interesting. The story line is rather intriguing :3