Desires Of The Unknown - Comments

Sequel-----> Jen/Gwen ends up moving on. She finds another guy that she thinks she loves but V comes back and she figures out that she is still deeply in love with him. Ect....

elmo? sure i remember that happy-go-lucky lil red fella!!!!
he had a high pitched voice, right?? well... not high high... but above average... and laughed like a hyena xP
loved the update!!!!!
and dayam!!! when will the prego news be spilled all ready??? xD

i hope u no u sucks my imagainary balls hehe or u can just suck the monkey balls lmao
anyways what do u mean something was impoprtant to the sequeal?? lol im so confused hehe
ummm... yea this stupid ipad is about to die so im going to shut up and let u read the rest of ur other comments if u have anymore lmao

Snuffleupagus?? xP
And yes. I have seen the old show... but I can't remember much of it. The Cookie Monster, Big Bird and Oscar the Grouch are the only ones I really remember xP

Great update by the way!!!

lol i really dont care how u do the storys squeal if its now or later but i eally dont want to wait for ever for another story cuz i got skool n august and i have to start volleyball b4 august so yea its gonna suck hehe but what u need to do is have her tell Valentine that shes Prego i want to no how he reacts to it hehe and u gota get another chapter out sooner lol im on this like everyday and i need something to read cuz not very many ppl rite that often hehe... anyways update soon and u r the one that got her pregnant cuz if it wasnt for u she wouldnt be pregnant just yet but u had to rite that she was pregnant lol

OMG im so sorry i forgot that i didnt leave a comment on the lat chapter i feel like a lowzy reader now hehe
but yea i cant believe u let her get pregnant that is just so wrong lol but it all good hehe... i wonder what valentine will think when he finds out i cant wait till he does lol anyways dont keep me waiting so long for another chapter hehe

loved the title of the last chapter!!!!
'or you could put snuffy up for adoption'
haha xP i seriously thought snuffy was a teddy bear xD
brilliant story by the way!!!!!
love it!!!

Lmao now that's funny
I hope she gives him the chance I no I would lol
They need to get it on hott and heavy lol
Omg it's finally summer I'm so happy and I get to babysit a 2n half month old baby lol
She s a sleep n my lap and won't let me put her down and Im hungry lol
Anyways u need to hurry up and rite another chapter

*really refreshing to read

I actually stopped reading for a while (however, I didn't unsubscribe) because of the blurry purple.
But! I realized, that you fixed that.
So I'll be happy to continue my reading of this story.
If'll you be so kind, could you read my story here.
I really like how unique the plot is. It's kind of refreshing to read.

ok now that was funny but the tampon thing was kinda gross lol...
i cant believe he did that 2 her he needs 2 really get the hell beat out of him lol...
anyways cant wait till the update

lol i like the chapter but i figured they would finish the other mission first lol
anyways cant wait for ur next update lol....
O and i might not b commenting alot for awhile because im losing my fone and internet
there geting shut off mine my mom and brothers lol...
it sucks snake balls lol...
ummm.... and was update soon cant wait...

Good. :D

OMG!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!
R U FOR REAL I CANT WAIT !!!!!
yay... lol
i like this chapter lol...
i hope it dont take to long to get the next chapters up i dont think i can wait very long lol
OMG still cant wait lol

lol well i cant wait ugh... i hate v day i wish it was over and done with already dang lol
and u need to rite another chapter soon please alot of the good storys have already been writen and im geting bored when i get home... save me from boredom please lol

lol r u for real over a Text i would b ike no u would have to ask me out n person lol
OMG and yes i no love s love every1 needs it and every1 loses it lol
Her and Valentine need to get to gether lol

lol u do get love even if it s just from me but at least u get it haha lol thanks for tha update lol
cant wait for tha next chapter...

lol ur so weird but u gota rite more on the story .lol i cant wait 2 read ur next chapter and ur other storys lol have fun writing ill b waiting hehe

I like it. But the words seem a little blurry...or is that just me.

its good so far but do u really got wait till next year lol...
ill b 17 by then lol...