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I really, really liked this piece. Somehow, the overall tone of it seemed optimistic, adventurous, and then at the very same time it seemed tame and calm - almost like the calm before storm, hehe. I also liked how the page color seemed to almost match the girls hair color. This was an amazing thing, what with the beautiful idea gorgeous imagery, and I'm glad I got to read it. :) <3

Wonderful descriptions and very captivating! Easily one of my favourite drabbles. =]

Haha, I wish to do that kind of stuff someday. I mean, this is very well-written and intriguing. What a fantastic drabble (:

This is very fantastically written. It was short, sweet, and to the point. The detailing was beautiful and I just loved this a lot. I could see her perfectly in my mind. Fantastic job!

I liked this. You really pulled me into the story.

She has hair the color of mixed fruit, and skin too pale for her to be from the desert.
I loved the describtion of her...

Vultures screech from somewhere across the dry land, cacti the only things adding a dash of color to endless brown while her faux leather ankle boots scrape against rocks and pebbles.
I could hear the bird and her feet scrap against the ground when I read that part...

The driver rolls the window down and she asses him; he has 5o’clock shadow and his hair is dark and shaggy. He, too, peers at her over his sunglasses.
I have no idea how but you've made him seem creepy yet inviting. How is that possible?

“Anywhere,” the girl breathes, and she props her dirty boots on his dash as he takes her to a world unknown.
I love how it ended, it's a mystery. I also liked how she was a drifter. The way you described it it seems appealing yet scary. ^.^

I really enjoyed this.

This is very good! I love how you add such mystery to it, but are to evil to make it longer. >:D

Beautifuly writen, and very descriptive. Captivating.