Aw, I really hoped for a better ending. Maybe he would have told someone or someone would have figured it out. But it was a good story, nonetheless. I might go check out some of your other stories now.
I WANTED HIM TO TELL SOMEONE OMYGOD. I'M LIKE READING YOUR STORIES AND YOU ALWAYS PUT LINKS AND SO I CLICK ON THEM WHY DO YOU WRITE SUCH SAD THINGS I LOVE YOU OMYGOD.
I hate being the 13th comment, but... Well, I just reread Do You Remember and was already in tears, and now I read this? You really know how to break someone heart, now don't you?
I...I...just cannot render the fact that this is fiction. It feels as though I have read this in a newspaper or the ending tagline should be "based on a true story". Chilling, yet beautifully written. You included vital details without making it a rape fantasy story.
I feel obligated to read the rest of your stories now.
Wow. This is why you should never stay alone... (I try my hardest not to) And the ending, although maybe a bit abrupt, really fit the whole line. I'm still amazed you write this well- it's perfect. =]
That was sad as fuck. I literally feel like crying now. That guy needs a big hug. And the shop guy needs a really good punching. And some jail time. It makes me so mad to think that stuff like that really does happen to people. It's not fair /: But your writing's really good. You've got skill.