Something's Not Right Here - Comments

I saw very few errors and the only ones I did I am guilty of as well. The layout is delightful and I like the plot a lot, you've got a good one and you should be able to use it to your advantage. It's a very original plot, so I think you'll really be able to keep your readers guessing about what is going to happen. I hope you keep writing this!

Well I just want to say that the plot is amazing and original. But wow, thirteen... That's. Young age for a person to have a kid. Seriously. :( anyways, I'm definitely going to subscribe so I can read more about this boy and his life. Also, I think he's popular because he's one ofthe only white kids there. But that's just a thought. Can't wait for more and this comment really sucked but I really don't have much to offer. My brain is fried xD