September 6th, 2011 at 02:15am
The writing on this is simply beautiful, and your plot is so developed and original, unlike any one shot I've ever read. The ending was as death to the pixies said, truly heartbreaking, and yet, the fact that there was some sort of hope threaded through like she would try to find a way, I don't know that just make it a little less painful. Whether or not I ever see it in writing you've endeared me enough to your characters that I really hope it all works out for them somehow. Finn meant well afterall, surely God will be forgiving.
Anywho, great work. :)
After reading "he was snoring slightly, curled up on his side with the tips of his wings brushing the ground", my ears pricked up like a fox. Your writing is incredibly intimate.
Marvelous, darling, marvelous. <3