Finn - Comments

Adore this!

After reading "he was snoring slightly, curled up on his side with the tips of his wings brushing the ground", my ears pricked up like a fox. Your writing is incredibly intimate.

Marvelous, darling, marvelous. <3

The writing on this is simply beautiful, and your plot is so developed and original, unlike any one shot I've ever read. The ending was as death to the pixies said, truly heartbreaking, and yet, the fact that there was some sort of hope threaded through like she would try to find a way, I don't know that just make it a little less painful. Whether or not I ever see it in writing you've endeared me enough to your characters that I really hope it all works out for them somehow. Finn meant well afterall, surely God will be forgiving.
Anywho, great work. :)

Brilliant piece, really heartwarming.
The ending is heartbreaking, but I think it's best that way. The way you wrote this is stunning and you've created beautiful images with your words.
Great job, and merry christmas <3

This was adorable. Finn is the kind of that everyone wants to know and the boyfriend that every girl wants and I've kinda fallen in love with Finn now he sounds sweet.This is the first Guardian Angel piece that I've read on Mibba and i loved it! The ending made tear up a little as I really didn't want him to leave. The layout is so pretty and cute!

Great job! <3

I nearly cried at the end </3

i loved it :D!!

so cute <3

FINNN :D<3

So firstly, you need to separate your paragraphs, it's one of the rules on the site.

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I really love Guardian Angel stories lately, just ever since reading Hush, Hush I've been totally obsessed with finding somewhat well written ones. And you have succeeded in satisfying that craving. It moves kind of slow, and I don't know if this is going to be a full chaptered story or what, but I feel that it needs to be...I don't know more in a way. But otherwise, great job. :)

I loved it!

I haven't seen many guadian angel (maybe I'm not looking hard wnough, lol) stories, but I think you got the happy, peppy, perfectness of the angels right.

There was one part where you said she had a Jeep... then her friend touched her BMW...?

And I was a little confused on the memory part. I first thought that Finn was the bad guy, lol.

But other then that I really, really, really loved it!

*wonders why no one else has commented as I press submit...*