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  • TogetherAgain

    TogetherAgain (100)

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    Sad yet an intriguing beginning. I'm curious to know how the story folds. Abusive relationships are so depressing. I'd like to see the girl end up happy :) Haha, 'I'm lazy. It'll be a while.' All I can say is that you're not alone. XDD
    December 17th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • New Perspective.'

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    Omg! Thanks. I had the italics on word, I forgot to convert them D:
    Thank you!
    December 14th, 2010 at 03:22pm
  • AnExaltationOfLarks

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    Hey I liked this, I'm interested to know how you're going to carry it on. One thing though: I'd maybe put her thoughts in italics, makes it easier to read instead of putting a full stop and then "She thought to herself"...but that's my only criticism. Well done!
    Ryan x
    December 14th, 2010 at 03:00pm
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