Don't Let me Fall - Comments

I loved this!!
It was wonderful.
Simply wonderful. :)

I really enjoyed this. I loved how you started with the present, went back in time to show how the two met and fell in love, and then reverted back to the present time. I also liked how simple the story is, and though it's very basic you pulled the reader in, making them want to know the couple's story. Good job!

Aw, this was so cute! I loved it. I also love the background and the banner; it all makes this even better. Great job with this. If you don't win the contest, I'll be shocked. :o ;D

From better.left.unsaid a.k.a your bestest friend Alex!:
This was sooo super gooood!
I think it'd be cool if you made it into a storyyy. ^_^