ohhhhhhhhhh i just read this too and its so sad! poor little girl with the same name as me :'(</3 i cant wait to read more. youre such a good writer its not even funny! :D
This is sooooo goood!!! :D I CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! Poor Emily!! I feel soooo bad for her! I know someone who that happened too, and its the saddest thing EVER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! KBYE :)
Ooooh, start out with a dramatic twist, I like that. Same thing I said on the last story don't shy away from being descriptive. One thing I really do enjoy about your writing is the complete originality. You can tell that you use your imagination and while things may inspire you, you don't use those exact details in the story. It creats something compeletely original and altogether enjoyable. I hope you don't loose that quality as you continue to write. Keep up the good work!
I'm really glad that I read this! I was surprised when I found out that Emily was only nine. I hope you update soon; I'm excited to see what's going to happen next! (By the way, the nurse mentioning Nathan as "the one with the dreds" was really funny :))