Come With Me - Comments

Can I just say again... I love this? <3

LOVE THE LAYOUT FIRST OF ALL. The banner is beautiful and sets the scene perfectly. All he could do was get out of his chair and walk slowly directly to her. I don't particularly like this line, it's just because of personal preferences though, All he could do... just sounds too restricting to me, there's no ~wide-spread feeling to it. I do like the surprise, you don't know who you're waiting for until the end reveals the girl. I like your descriptions and that you didn't go too into detail with everything because it's fitting. I enjoyed it overall.

Haha thanks!
Well, I can't say if it's wrong or right 'cause I wrote it in spanish first and then traduced it, I wanted it to be better than what I expected. I don't really know if change it or not :/ But thanks so much for the comment.
Okay, the banner was a random picture that I found on DeviantART and just made it purple, it was black and white so it was really easy. Thanks for this all (:

This was beautiful, and I really loved the imagery in the beginning.
However (and maybe it's just me) the second paragraph doesn't really make sense to me. Some word rearrangement might make it better :)
Beautiful banner and overall, nice job!

Hahaha, thank you a lot. Happy you liked it (:

This was quite lovely, wonderful imagery. I really enjoyed the layout as well, and I like how you described her as being pure.

Haha, I'm really glad you liked this. I did it in Spanish, too. Just to have it as a cute memory. Yeah, well.. No one really knows what they can do until they just do it, right?

Let's say this is a gift, not in exchange, it's a gift for ya (:

I loved this. First of all, it was so flattering and so sweet. It made me smile that that is what you think of me! I loved the way she responded when he came over, that was cute and I wonder if I'd ever have the guts to do that.

You're wonderful and lovely and I can't thank you enough for this. :)