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  • ThingCalledLove

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    Wow, that was so unexpected,
    but great at the same time.
    Poor Jordan, and poor Nicolette,
    her family all falling apart like that.
    I'm really interested to see what the
    next chapter reveals.
    Can't wait for the next update.
    I LOVE this story.
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:59am
  • Cupcake1

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    great chapter! cant wait for the next one
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:42am
  • xbeccabee

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    FUCK.

    That was intense and so amazing.

    Can't wait for an update.

    ^ I just realized that rhymed.
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:30am
  • xbeccabee

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    GIEHNRGERJGLENHEG

    So fucking cute.
    January 22nd, 2011 at 07:52am
  • Janet Crosby

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    This story is really different than most.
    I'm liking the way you have it written.
    Poor Jordan, he got laughed in his face by the girl he liked.
    If he told me he liked me, I would probably never ever laugh in his face.
    That's what makes it so real though.
    January 21st, 2011 at 06:11pm
  • ThingCalledLove

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    This might just be one of the cutest fics I've ever read. You're a great writer, and this story is so original. I love it, and every time I see it's updated, I do a little happy dance :P
    January 21st, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • Cupcake1

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    great chapter! poor jordan :( if he told me he liked me i wouldnt laugh at him thats for sure
    January 21st, 2011 at 03:56pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Aww, poor Jordan I feel bad for him. Great job, keep it up
    January 21st, 2011 at 05:01am
  • Blues_Jukkes

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    Classic :) keep writing, i cant wait for more!
    January 21st, 2011 at 04:28am
  • Janet Crosby

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    I loved this and I kind of hate how she didn't appreciate it.
    I am so jealous even though I've met him before!
    January 18th, 2011 at 11:16pm
  • xbeccabee

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    Awwwww.

    Staalsy is so cute.
    January 18th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • Cupcake1

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    this chapter was adorable...cant wait for the next one
    January 18th, 2011 at 05:09pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Great chapter....I"M JEALOUS! I can't believe you got to meet Max. How was it? Was he as sweet as he seems?
    January 18th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • laurenx007

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    I AM SO JEALOUS! That is awesome that you met Max and I want to go into Suite 66 sometime! (: Luckyyyy girll!
    Oh, and good update!
    January 18th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • ThingCalledLove

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    That was adorable. Like I can't tell you how much I love this story. Jordan standing up for her was super cute, too bad she didn't thank him for it. Marc teasing him about her being is girlfriend was just perfect. Can't wait until your next update.

    Also, you got to meet Max? Lucky! Is he as awesome as he seems to be? :P
    January 18th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • megpie12

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    Awe poor Jordan. Didn't even get a thank you. I love this story. I can almost see Jordan standing up for her. It's so cute. :)
    January 18th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • didyoueventry

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    i love the way you're writing this story and jordan and nicolette's personalities :)
    i can't wait to see where you take this!
    January 17th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • xbeccabee

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    Sososososososososososososososo cuuute. :)
    January 16th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • ThingCalledLove

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    This was ridiculously cute. Little Jordan Staal is amazing, and I love how feisty Nicolette is, even at the tender age of ten. I love the way you have this story formatted, and you are quite the writer. I can't wait for the next update!
    January 16th, 2011 at 05:51am
  • Janet Crosby

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    I was smiling like crazy after Jordan scored his first goal.
    This chapter was nice, but sometimes funny.
    I can't wait for the next one!
    January 14th, 2011 at 01:43am
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