I am speechless. I am honestly speechless. I have no idea what to say about an amazing story like this. The way that you phrase everything.. it's all so perfect. Not a word out of place. And sure, it took me a little while to figure just who was who. But, now that I've got it down, I can't stop reading.
The beginning made my heart break. It was so livid. And it makes me want to know more about their past together. I want to know exactly where she died, why she died, how long she was going on like this. How long she was making herself throw up. How long he has been making himself throw up. I guess I'll never know, but that's what is so great. Your story is such a mystery. There is so much hidden.
The names were such mysteries at first, too. Frank is obviously at war with himself. I'm beginning to wonder if Bee is actually a real person, or if he is just in this poor boy's head. I never would have thought of anorexia and bulimia as being such a war. In fact, I never would have thought that this story would be about a boy with eating disorders. I thought it would be a stereotypical Frank/Gerard. But it's as far from stereotypical as you can get.
I'm so happy that this poor kid has finally overcome Bee, even if it is just to invite Gerard over. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen. And I have already subscribed, hoping for a new update very soon.
Can't wait. Update soon! I will definitely be leaving more comments. Your writing style is inspiring. Don't be surprised if I leave some comments on your other stories.
The beginning made my heart break. It was so livid. And it makes me want to know more about their past together. I want to know exactly where she died, why she died, how long she was going on like this. How long she was making herself throw up. How long he has been making himself throw up. I guess I'll never know, but that's what is so great. Your story is such a mystery. There is so much hidden.
The names were such mysteries at first, too. Frank is obviously at war with himself. I'm beginning to wonder if Bee is actually a real person, or if he is just in this poor boy's head. I never would have thought of anorexia and bulimia as being such a war. In fact, I never would have thought that this story would be about a boy with eating disorders. I thought it would be a stereotypical Frank/Gerard. But it's as far from stereotypical as you can get.
I'm so happy that this poor kid has finally overcome Bee, even if it is just to invite Gerard over. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen. And I have already subscribed, hoping for a new update very soon.
Can't wait. Update soon!