awe, i really liked that. i was hoping at least one person would do one set in early times, so i'm happy now :) i like the idea behind it, and the quote went very nicely with it. the language was a bit modern for the times, but it can be really hard to write like people would have spoken back then, so you still did really well. great job overall!
i like the idea behind it, and the quote went very nicely with it.
the language was a bit modern for the times, but it can be really hard to write like people would have spoken back then, so you still did really well.
great job overall!